Avoid 'allows to' #2685
Avoid 'allows to' #2685
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chapters/revisions.tex
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| and demonstrated its use on a vehicle dynamics example. Utilizing the | |||
| prototype implementation, Francesco Casella demonstrated with a model of | |||
| a thermal power plant with 390 iteration variables of the initialization | |||
| problem, that an appropriate usage of the homotopy operator allows to | |||
| problem, that an appropriate usage of the homotopy operator lets one | |||
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I don't recognize us using one in this way. If that's correct, maybe we shouldn't start doing it now? For instance, why not this?
problem, that an appropriate usage of the homotopy operator allows the system to be initialized reliably without…
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Yes, that makes sense - I have changed that now. It was only done in the revisions chapter.
chapters/operatorsandexpressions.tex
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| \lstinline!spatialDistribution! allows to approximate efficiently the solution of the infinite-dimensional problem | |||
| \lstinline!spatialDistribution! lets one approximate efficiently the solution of the infinite-dimensional problem | |||
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I suppose this one was forgotten in the last commit? Maybe this could work:
| \lstinline!spatialDistribution! lets one approximate efficiently the solution of the infinite-dimensional problem | |
| \lstinline!spatialDistribution! allows efficient approximate solution of the infinite-dimensional problem |
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It was missed, but I don't think that is the best option. I changed it more completely.
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| \end{nonnormative} | |||
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| \lstinline!spatialDistribution! lets one approximate efficiently the solution of the infinite-dimensional problem | |||
| \lstinline!spatialDistribution! allows the infinite-dimensional problem below to be solved efficiently with good accuracy | |||
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Not bad at all. How about some punctuation (like a period or a colon) at the end, before the equation?
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Hmm... I will have to think more about which punctuation is best, so take that later.
Closes #2380