MDL-22276 rewording lang strings

mod/workshop/lang/en/workshop.php

@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 $string['evaluategradeswait'] = 'Please wait until the assessments are evaluated and the grades are calculated';
 $string['evaluation'] = 'Grading evaluation';
 $string['evaluationmethod'] = 'Grading evaluation method';
-$string['evaluationmethod_help'] = 'The method how grades for assessments are calculated for each reviewer.';
+$string['evaluationmethod_help'] = 'The grading evaluation method determines how the grade for assessment is calculated. There is currently just one option - comparison with the best assessment.';
 $string['example'] = 'Example submission';
 $string['exampleadd'] = 'Add example submission';
 $string['exampleassess'] = 'Assess example submission';
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
 $string['gradeover'] = 'Override grade for submission';
 $string['gradereceivedfrom'] = '<';
 $string['gradinggrade'] = 'Grade for assessment';
-$string['gradinggrade_help'] = 'Maximum grade that a participant may be given for assessing other\'s work. It tries to meassure the reliability and the quality of the assessment. It is calculated as a mean of particular grades for assessment (also known as grading grades). That grades are calculated automatically by grading evaluation subplugin.';
+$string['gradinggrade_help'] = 'This setting specifies the maximum grade a student can obtain for their assessment of the work of others.';
 $string['gradinggradecalculated'] = 'Calculated grade for assessment';
 $string['gradinggradeof'] = 'Grade for assessment (of {$a})';
 $string['gradinggradeover'] = 'Override grade for assessment';
@@ -120,8 +120,8 @@
 $string['instructreviewers'] = 'Instructions for assessing';
 $string['introduction'] = 'Introduction';
 $string['latesubmissions'] = 'Late submissions';
-$string['latesubmissions_desc'] = 'Allow submitting the work after the deadline';
-$string['latesubmissions_help'] = 'If late submissions are allowed then workshop participants can submit their work even after the deadline for submitting. Late submission can\'t be edited after it has been saved. This allows the participants who have not manage to submit their work in time (because they were ill, for example) to continue the workshop activity. Note that a submission can be allocated to a reviewer for assessment even if the reviewer has not submitted his/her own work.';
+$string['latesubmissions_desc'] = 'Allow submissions after the deadline';
+$string['latesubmissions_help'] = 'If enabled, a student may submit their work after the deadline. Late submissions cannot be edited.';
 $string['maxbytes'] = 'Maximum file size';
 $string['messageclose'] = '(X)';
 $string['modulename'] = 'Workshop';
@@ -154,50 +154,55 @@
 $string['saveandcontinue'] = 'Save and continue editing';
 $string['saveandpreview'] = 'Save and preview';
 $string['selfassessmentdisabled'] = 'Self-assessment disabled';
-$string['someuserswosubmission'] = 'There are some users who have not submitted yet';
+$string['someuserswosubmission'] = 'There is at least one student who has not yet submitted their work';
 $string['sortasc'] = 'Ascending sort';
 $string['sortdesc'] = 'Descending sort';
 $string['strategy'] = 'Grading strategy';
-$string['strategy_help'] = 'Grading strategy defines how the assessment form can look like and how the grade for submission is calculated based on the assessment.';
+$string['strategy_help'] = 'The grading strategy determines the assessment form used and the method of grading submissions. There are 4 options:
+
+* Accumulative grading - Comments and a grade are given regarding specified aspects
+* Comments - Comments are given regarding specified aspects but no grade can be given
+* Number of errors - Comments and a yes/no assessment are given regarding specified assertions 
+* Rubric - A level assessment is given regarding specified criteria';
 $string['strategyhaschanged'] = 'The workshop grading strategy has changed since the form was opened for editing.';
 $string['submission'] = 'Submission';
 $string['submissionattachment'] = 'Attachment';
 $string['submissioncontent'] = 'Submission content';
 $string['submissionend'] = 'Submitting not allowed after';
 $string['submissiongrade'] = 'Grade for submission';
-$string['submissiongrade_help'] = 'Maximum grade that the authors may get for their submission. The grade for submission is calculated as a weighted mean of all assessments of the given submission, done by peers and/or teachers.';
+$string['submissiongrade_help'] = 'This setting specifies the maximum grade a student can obtain for their own submission. It is calculated as the weighted mean of all assessments done by peers and/or teachers.';
 $string['submissiongradeof'] = 'Grade for submission (of {$a})';
 $string['submissionsettings'] = 'Submission settings';
 $string['submissionstart'] = 'Submitting not allowed before';
 $string['submissiontitle'] = 'Title';
 $string['switchingphase'] = 'Switching phase';
 $string['switchphase'] = 'Switch phase';
-$string['switchphase10info'] = 'You are going to switch the Workshop into the <strong>Setup phase</strong>. During this phase, workshop participants can\'t modify either their submissions or assessments. Teachers can use this phase to change workshop settings, modify grading strategy of tweak assessment forms.';
-$string['switchphase20info'] = 'You are going to switch the Workshop into the <strong>Submission phase</strong>. Workshop participants can submit their work during this phase. If you have set submitting deadlines in the workshop configuration, they will be respected in this phase. Teachers can watch the submitting progress and allocate submissions for a peer review.';
-$string['switchphase30info'] = 'You are going to switch the Workshop into the <strong>Assessment phase</strong>. In this phase, reviewers are able to assess the submissions that have been allocated to them for assessment.';
-$string['switchphase40info'] = 'You are going to switch the Workshop into the <strong>Grading evaluation phase</strong>. Workshop participants can\'t either modify their assessments or amend submissions. Teachers are able to use grading evaluation tools to calculate final grades and provide feedback for reviewers.';
-$string['switchphase50info'] = 'You are going to close the Workshop. This pushes the calculated grades into the course gradebook. Workshop participants can see their work and assessments. Published submissions as made available.';
+$string['switchphase10info'] = 'You are about to switch the workshop into the <strong>Setup phase</strong>. In this phase, students cannot modify their submissions or their assessments. Teachers may use this phase to change workshop settings, modify the grading strategy of tweak assessment forms.';
+$string['switchphase20info'] = 'You are about to switch the workshop into the <strong>Submission phase</strong>. Students may submit their work during this phase. If submitting deadlines have been set, they will be respected in this phase. Teachers may allocate submissions for peer review.';
+$string['switchphase30info'] = 'You are about to switch the workshop into the <strong>Assessment phase</strong>. In this phase, reviewers may assess the submissions they have been allocated.';
+$string['switchphase40info'] = 'You are about to switch the workshop into the <strong>Grading evaluation phase</strong>. In this phase, students cannot modify their submissions or their assessments. Teachers may use the grading evaluation tools to calculate final grades and provide feedback for reviewers.';
+$string['switchphase50info'] = 'You are about to close the workshop. This will result in the calculated grades appearing in the gradebook. Students may view their submissions and their assessments.';
 $string['taskassesspeers'] = 'Assess peers';
 $string['taskassesspeersdetails'] = 'total: {$a->total}<br />pending: {$a->todo}';
 $string['taskassessself'] = 'Assess yourself';
 $string['taskinstructauthors'] = 'Provide instructions for submitting';
 $string['taskinstructreviewers'] = 'Provide instructions for assessing';
 $string['taskintro'] = 'Set the workshop introduction';
 $string['tasksubmit'] = 'Submit your work';
-$string['undersetup'] = 'The workshop is currently under setup. Please wait until it is switched to the next phase.';
+$string['undersetup'] = 'The workshop is currently being set up. Please wait until it is switched to the next phase.';
 $string['useexamples'] = 'Use examples';
-$string['useexamples_desc'] = 'Users practise evaluating on example submissions';
-$string['useexamples_help'] = 'Workshop participants can practise the assessment procedure on example submissions, provided by teacher. For example, there can be a sample of one good submission and one weak submission provided together with an assessment. This step may help understanding the assessment criteria.';
+$string['useexamples_desc'] = 'Example submissions are provided for practice in assessing';
+$string['useexamples_help'] = 'If enabled, students can try assessing one or more example submissions and compare their assessment with a reference assessment. The grade is not counted in the grade for assessment.';
 $string['usepeerassessment'] = 'Use peer assessment';
-$string['usepeerassessment_desc'] = 'Users perform peer assessment of others\' work';
-$string['usepeerassessment_help'] = 'If the peer assessment support is off, workshop participants are not expected to assess their peers\' work. They do not receive any grade for assessment (grading grade) and their grade for submission is based on teacher\'s assessment only.';
+$string['usepeerassessment_desc'] = 'Students may assess the work of others';
+$string['usepeerassessment_help'] = 'If enabled, a student may be allocated submissions from other students to assess and will receive a grade for assessment in addition to a grade for their own submission.';
 $string['userdatecreated'] = 'submitted on <span>{$a}</span>';
 $string['userdatemodified'] = 'modified on <span>{$a}</span>';
-$string['userplan'] = 'Workshop main page';
-$string['userplan_help'] = 'At the main page, you can see so called *Workshop user planner*. That displays the current workshop phase and all the tasks you are supposed to the given phase.';
-$string['useselfassessment'] = 'Use self assessment';
-$string['useselfassessment_desc'] = 'Users perform self assessment of their own work';
-$string['useselfassessment_help'] = 'Whether users are allowed to assess their own work. Note that you must still allocate the submissions to their authors explicitely, using some allocation plugin.';
+$string['userplan'] = 'Workshop planner';
+$string['userplan_help'] = 'The workshop planner displays all phases of the activity and lists the tasks for each phase. The current phase is highlighted. Phases may be switched by clicking the lightbulb icon.';
+$string['useselfassessment'] = 'Use self-assessment';
+$string['useselfassessment_help'] = 'If enabled, a student may be allocated their own submission to assess and will receive a grade for assessment in addition to a grade for their submission.';
+$string['useselfassessment_desc'] = 'Students may assess their own work';
 $string['withoutsubmission'] = 'Reviewer without own submission';
 $string['workshopadministration'] = 'Workshop administration';
 $string['workshop:allocate'] = 'Allocate submissions for review';