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Finalize content for the Home Page #86
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Apologies in advance for the length of this post, I got excited. 💥 The MLab's site has a similar structure to ours, but I kind of like the video embedded as a way to introduce the science lab and what we do, maybe we could film this ourselves and include cameos from our calls to illustrate how the Science Lab is built from a distributed team, and "mobile labs" globally, without too much focus on the lab members (as in the About page). I also like the 2-part nav, where the header has two calls to action ("Help us grow and improve" button leads to -> http://www.measurementlab.net/contribute), maybe we could put in the Training page "be a mentor" and "be a learner" content at the end of these links. And then the secondary nav has other options. I like Contribute | Collaborate | Convene options for the header more now, like the CCC option in the nav suggestions where:
Sites I like:
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For content, here's our latest mission statement we wrote in the fall where we tried to accurately reflect our program and offerings (emphasis mine) The Mozilla Science Lab works to make research collaborative, accessible, and usable. We do this by:
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Also, @auremoser -- I think a lot of your comments are more related to some of the other issues: #84 for IA, #87 for home page UI/UX, along with this one! Thanks for some great inspiration 😄 |
Oh, do you want me to move them @acabunoc ? I'm sorry! I should have written some more content instead. |
I like the idea of an intro video--- we really need a good way to communicate what we do and why. |
Great benchmarks and thoughts so far. I've copied some of the comments that are specifically related to IA over to #84, though I realize it's often hard to think about a homepage and not also think about navigation. So, it sounds like for homepage content, so far we have the idea of a video and something that conveys the scope of the mission. Does that seem right to everyone? |
@hannahkane that sounds about right to me! However, I'm a bit worried about how we're going to produce a high quality video -- do we have time/resources to do this? I've never made a good quality video so this is very daunting to me. |
Kaitlin and I have been talking about generating some A/V for the web and Z On Fri, Feb 19, 2016 at 10:47 AM, Abigail Cabunoc Mayes <
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Sent out meeting invite to @mozillascience/msl-staff to plan home page content on Monday |
Great. Let us know how it goes, or if you'd like for a designer to attend. I'd also be happy to attend. |
Thanks @hannahkane! I added you, @my-le & @kristinashu as optional in the invite :) |
Notes from today's meeting: https://public.etherpad-mozilla.org/p/sciencelab-homepage-content |
Next steps: @kaythaney, @hannahkane and @kristinashu to come up with specific copy/content suggestions by Friday. Others are welcome to as well! :) |
Started a brainstorming document, experimenting with different "flavors" of writing styles. @kaythaney @zee-moz @stephwright @auremoser @acabunoc @kristinashu - feel free to comment / add stuff |
Thanks for all the feedback so far. Going to roll this into the next heartbeat to give us more time to brainstorm. @kaythaney - will you be the ultimate decider on final copy? |
yep - put me down for that one. :) On Thu, Feb 25, 2016 at 3:12 PM, hannahkane notifications@github.com
@kaythaney http://twitter.com/kaythaney/ |
I re-organized the doc a bit and added a Table of Contents so we can easily see the different pieces of content we need to finalize. Also added a few questions for the group. Would be great if people could go in one more time to add more ideas and opinions. Don't be afraid to say what you don't like; nixing things is really helpful at this point (I'm using strikethrough to cross off lines that ppl don't like so far). The plan we discussed at the kickoff meeting today:
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As discussed at today's stand I will review this from a design perspective, @hannahkane and I can clean up and remove some of the noise, @kaythaney will work on some of the longer/more descriptive copy and then put a final stamp of approval. |
We've done some cleanup in the doc but I think the finalization or near-finalization of home page content should wait for the IA results, which we should hear back on soon. Then we can use the content doc to help reinforce those themes and decisions. |
thanks, cassie. i also added some "open science" primer language, that i'd On Thu, Mar 3, 2016 at 5:53 PM, Cassie McDaniel notifications@github.com
@kaythaney http://twitter.com/kaythaney/ |
Thanks to @cassiemc and @kaythaney for the updates. If you check out the doc now, you'll see a final suggestion for the homepage content. It includes: a tagline, a short section for "About MSL," a short blurb on "What is Open Science?," and very brief descriptions of our programmatic offerings. Would love final copy edits from @kaythaney. My only concern here is that it's a lot of content for the homepage. @kristinashu—can you take a look and advise on whether it needs to be cut down further? |
The amount of copy looks good to me. |
Thumbs up on this end. Thanks, all! On Mon, Mar 7, 2016 at 4:20 PM, Kristina notifications@github.com wrote:
@kaythaney http://twitter.com/kaythaney/ |
Sweet. I'm going to close this ticket! Thanks, everyone! |
We'd love to see the home page better represent the Science Lab.
Looping in @zee-moz & @auremoser here help figure out what should go on our new home page!
See related #87, with UI/UX work on the home page
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