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Co-authored-by: Matt <github@nospam.33m.co>
mui · Aug 8, 2022 · 96b4f83 · 96b4f83
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diff --git a/docs/src/components/pricing/FAQ.tsx b/docs/src/components/pricing/FAQ.tsx
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ const faqData = [
     detail: (
       <React.Fragment>
         The number of licenses purchased must correspond to the number of concurrent developers
-        contributing changes to the front-end code of the projects that uses MUI X Pro or Premium.
+        contributing changes to the front-end code of projects that use MUI X Pro or Premium.
         <br />
         <br />
         <b>Example 1.</b> Company 'A' is developing an application named 'AppA'. The app needs to
@@ -59,11 +59,11 @@ const faqData = [
     ),
   },
   {
-    summary: 'Why do we must license developers not using the software directly?',
+    summary: 'Why must we license developers not using the software directly?',
     detail: (
       <React.Fragment>
         Our pricing model requires all developers working on a project using MUI X Pro or Premium to
-        be licensed. This is intended to make it easier for you and your team to know if right
+        be licensed. This is intended to make it easier for you and your team to know if the right
         number of developers are licensed. It tries to emulate the simplicity of the open-source
         licenses.
         <br />
@@ -74,14 +74,14 @@ const faqData = [
         supported.
         <br />
         <br />
-        The price point per developer was adjusted to be lower than what it would be if only direct
+        The price point per developer is adjusted to be lower than if only direct
         use needed a license.{' '}
         <Link
           target="_blank"
           rel="noopener"
           href="https://mui.com/store/legal/mui-x-eula/#required-quantity-of-licenses"
         >
-          The clause in the EULA.
+          The relevant EULA clause.
         </Link>
       </React.Fragment>
     ),

diff --git a/docs/src/components/pricing/WhatToExpect.tsx b/docs/src/components/pricing/WhatToExpect.tsx
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ export default function WhatToExpect() {
               </Typography>
             </Box>
             <Typography variant="body2" color="text.secondary">
-              You can use the software in a production environment forever. All the versions of the
-              software released until the end of your subscription are available in perpetuity.
+              You can use the software in a production environment forever. Any version of the
+              software released prior to the end of your subscription are available in perpetuity.
               There are no further charges unless you choose to continue development. See the
               &quot;Development license&quot; section of this page for more details.
             </Typography>
@@ -57,9 +57,9 @@ export default function WhatToExpect() {
               </Typography>
             </Box>
             <Typography variant="body2" color="text.secondary">
-              The licenses are sold on a per-developer basis, using the software directly or
-              indirectly. The Pro plan includes a cap at 10 developers, extra developers do not need
-              to pay for their license. You can contact{' '}
+              The licenses are sold on a per front-end developer basis.
+              The Pro plan includes is capped at ten licenses; you do not need to pay for additional licenses for more than ten developers.
+              You can contact{' '}
               <Link href="mailto:sales@mui.com">sales</Link> for a volume discount when licensing
               over 50 developers under the Premium plan.
             </Typography>
@@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ export default function WhatToExpect() {
               <Link href="https://mui.com/x/introduction/support/#technical-support">
                 learn more about support
               </Link>{' '}
-              in the docs. Note that, except for critical issues, e.g. security, we release bug
-              fixes, and other improvements on top of the latest version, instead of patching older
+              in the docs. Note that, except for critical issues, such as security flaws, we release bug
+              fixes and other improvements on top of the latest version, instead of patching older
               versions.
             </Typography>
           </Paper>