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tweak questionnaire target page text for consistency
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23 changes: 7 additions & 16 deletions templates/website/response-no.html
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Expand Up @@ -17,26 +17,17 @@ <h2>Thanks for your feedback&hellip; and another question</h2>
<div class="row">
<div class="large-8 large-centered columns">

<p>Sorry to hear that you haven’t received a reply from your representative.</p>
<p>We hope your representative gets back to you with a full answer soon.</p>

<p>There’s just one more thing we’d like to know.</p>
<p>If they don&rsquo;t then see <a href="/about-qa#noreply" target="_blank">What should I do if my MP (or other representative) doesn&rsquo;t reply?</a> (opens in new window).</p>

<h3>Is this the first time you’ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</h3>
<h3>One more question ...</h3>

<p class="questionnaire-buttons"><a href=<?=$values['first_time_yes']?> class="button">Yes</a> <a
href=<?=$values['first_time_no']?> class="button">No</a></p>
<p>Is this the first time you&rsquo;ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</p>

<p>We hope your representative will reply soon. If so, you can come back to your
email and complete the questionnaire at any time &ndash; new responses
will overwrite any previous ones.</p>

<p>WriteToThem is an independent service, and unfortunately we don’t
have any control over how representatives respond.</p>

<p>But if you’d like to take things further
<a href="/about-qa#noreply" target="_blank">we have a few suggestions here</a>
(opens in new window).</p>
<p><a href=<?=$values['first_time_yes']?> class="button">Yes</a> <a
href=<?=$values['first_time_no']?> class="button">No</a><p>

<p>Why are we being so nosey? Well, one of our aims is to convince
politicians that, used wisely, the Web can encourage much greater
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8 changes: 4 additions & 4 deletions templates/website/response-not-expected.html
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Expand Up @@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ <h2>Thanks for your feedback&hellip; and another question</h2>
<div class="row">
<div class="large-8 large-centered columns">

<p>Thanks for your feedback!</p>
<p>Many, many thanks for your feedback.</p>

<p>There just more more thing we’d like to know.<p>
<h3>One more question ...</h3>

<h3>Is this the first time you’ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</h3>
<p>Is this the first time you&rsquo;ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</p>

<p class="questionnaire-buttons"><a href=<?=$values['first_time_yes']?> class="button">Yes</a> <a
href=<?=$values['first_time_no']?> class="button">No</a></p>
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12 changes: 6 additions & 6 deletions templates/website/response-unsatisfactory.html
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Expand Up @@ -17,21 +17,21 @@ <h2>Thanks for your feedback&hellip; and another question</h2>
<div class="row">
<div class="large-8 large-centered columns">

<p>Sorry to hear that your representative’s response wasn’t all you’d
<p>Sorry to hear that your representative&rsquo;s response wasn&rsquo;t all you&rsquo;d
hoped for.</p>

<p>There just more more thing we’d like to know.<p>
<h3>One more question ...</h3>

<h3>Is this the first time you’ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</h3>
<p>Is this the first time you&rsquo;ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</p>

<p class="questionnaire-buttons"><a href=<?=$values['first_time_yes']?> class="button">Yes</a> <a
href=<?=$values['first_time_no']?> class="button">No</a></p>

<p>WriteToThem is an independent service, and unfortunately we don’t
<p>WriteToThem is an independent service, and unfortunately we don&rsquo;t
have any control over how representatives respond.</p>

<p>But if you’d like to take things further
<p>But if you&rsquo;d like to take things further
<a href="/about-qa#unsatis" target="_blank">we have a few suggestions here</a>
(opens in new window).</p>

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14 changes: 7 additions & 7 deletions templates/website/response-yes.html
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Expand Up @@ -17,16 +17,16 @@ <h2>Thanks for your feedback&hellip; and another question</h2>
<div class="row">
<div class="large-8 large-centered columns">

<p>That’s great! We’re glad to hear you got a response from
your representative.</p>
<p>Great! Many, many thanks for your feedback. We’re delighted that your
representative got back to you.</p>

<p>There’s just one more thing we’d like to know.</p>
<h3>One more question ...</h3>

<h3>Is this the first time you’ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</h3>
<p>Is this the first time you&rsquo;ve ever contacted one of your
political representatives, by any means?</p>

<p class="questionnaire-buttons"><a href=<?=$values['first_time_yes']?> class="button">Yes</a> <a
href=<?=$values['first_time_no']?> class="button">No</a></p>
<p><a href=<?=$values['first_time_yes']?> class="button">Yes</a> <a
href=<?=$values['first_time_no']?> class="button">No</a><p>

<p>Why are we being so nosey? Well, one of our aims is to convince
politicians that, used wisely, the Web can encourage much greater
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