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-We have made some improvements to our existing Get Chart Link feature! Please read below about what is changing and how to use these improvements in the Get Chart Link feature. **These changes will take effect on April 30th, 2024.**
+We've made improvements to our existing Get Chart Link feature, which will take effect on **April 30th, 2024.**
 
 ## What's changing?
-We have implemented some improvements to Role-Based Access Controls (RBACs) for Pro and Enterprise accounts. Here is what you can expect to see if you are a user from **Pro or Enterprise account:**
-- Admins will get new [permission options](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/accounts/accounts-billing/new-relic-one-user-management/user-permissions/#dashboards) to allow certain users to view, create, and revoke chart links.
-- Other users will gain access to the permissions via admins. The access will be possible only through custom roles which are created only by admins.
-- Existing links from your account will continue to work. So if you want to delete/disable any of these existing links, please visit our [Manage Your Dashboard Documentation](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/query-your-data/explore-query-data/dashboards/manage-your-dashboard/#data-share).
 
+We've improved Role-Based Access Controls (RBACs) for Pro and Enterprise accounts. 
 
-## Why?
-We are updating the chart-sharing features to increase security controls for customer accounts and their admins. 
+If you're a user from **Pro or Enterprise account, you can expect these changes:
+
+- Admins receive new [permission options](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/accounts/accounts-billing/new-relic-one-user-management/user-permissions/#dashboards) to allow certain users to view, create, and revoke chart links.
+- Other users gain access to these permissions via admins. The access is only possible only custom roles created  by admins.
+- Your existing links within your account will continue to work. If you want to delete or disable any of these existing links, review the Data share section of our [Manage Your Dashboard Documentation](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/query-your-data/explore-query-data/dashboards/manage-your-dashboard/#data-share) documentation.
 
 ## What action is needed by you?
+
 Review your user permissions and ensure the right user roles have access to creating live chart URLs.
 
-Review the Documentation:
+You can learn how to make necessary changes at the following docs:
+
 - [User permissions](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/accounts/accounts-billing/new-relic-one-user-management/user-permissions/#dashboards)
 - [Manage your dashboard > Share your data](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/query-your-data/explore-query-data/dashboards/manage-your-dashboard/#data-share)
-- [NerdGraph tutorial: List and revoke live chart URLs](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/apis/nerdgraph/examples/manage-live-chart-urls-via-api/)
+- [NerdGraph tutorial: List and revoke live chart URLs](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/apis/nerdgraph/examples/manage-live-chart-urls-via-api/)
+
+## Why?
+
+We're updating our chart sharing features to increase security controls for customer accounts and their admins.