fix(data plus): fixing some wording

src/content/whats-new/2022/04/whats-new-4-14-data-updates.md

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-title: 'New Data Plus offering and updated data ingest list price'
-summary: 'Coming soon: a new Data Plus pricing option with more benefits, and a data ingest price increase.'
+title: 'New Data Plus option and updated data ingest list price'
+summary: 'Coming soon: a new Data Plus option with more benefits, and a data ingest price increase.'
 releaseDate: '2022-04-14'
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 ## Introducing Data Plus (New!) 
 
-Starting June 1, 2022, customers on our [New Relic One pricing model](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/accounts/original-accounts-billing/original-product-based-pricing/overview-pricing-models) will be able to choose between the existing data offering and a new "Data Plus" option, listed at the promotional price of $0.50/GB ingested (includes $1.15/GB of value), to avoid ballooning data costs when scaling your observability practice. 
+Starting June 1, 2022, customers on our [usage-based pricing model](https://docs.newrelic.com/docs/accounts/original-accounts-billing/original-product-based-pricing/overview-pricing-models) will be able to choose between our original data option and a new Data Plus option, listed at the promotional price of $0.50/GB ingested (includes $1.15/GB of value), to avoid ballooning data costs when scaling your observability practice. 
 
 Data Plus combines at-scale performance and governance capabilities in one simple, predictable, and affordable price per gigabyte which is 56%+ more cost effective than paying for each capability individually. Data Plus includes: 
 
 * **Up to 90 days of data retention:** Instead of paying individual premiums for data indexing and retention of each data source, customers will be able to choose which data they want stored longer in New Relic without increasing their monthly costs.
-* **Up to 3x the max query limits and 2x the max query duration:** Engineers can inspect up to one trillion data points per 30 minutes and 100 billion data points per one minute (compared to 300 billion data points per 30 minutes and 10 billion data points per minute). In addition, Data Plus customers get a max query duration of up to 2 minutes (compared to 60 seconds for the original data option).
+* **Up to 3x the max query limits and 2x the max query duration:** Engineers can inspect up to one trillion data points per 30 minutes and 100 billion data points per minute (compared to 300 billion data points per 30 minutes and 10 billion data points per minute). In addition, Data Plus customers get a max query duration of up to 2 minutes (compared to 60 seconds for our original data option).
 * **FedRAMP and HIPAA compliance:** New Relic Data Plus provides options for customers in highly regulated sectors to enable security configurations required for FedRAMP and HIPAA compliance. (Requires Enterprise edition.)
 * **Logs obfuscation:** Engineers can track logs obfuscation rules directly in the log management UI and create anonymous identifiers for sensitive log data such as personally identifiable information (PII), access tokens, and other private or regulated data.
 * **Cloud provider choice (coming soon):** Flexibility to run observability workloads on the cloud provider of your choice, AWS or Microsoft Azure, to align your telemetry storage with your engineering deployment model and cloud preference. 
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 * Free customers will see no change to their plan. If customers would like to ingest more than 100GB per month, they can upgrade to a paid plan, which will include the new $0.30 per GB per month price.
 * Existing paid self-serve customers will not see an immediate ingest price increase on June 1, 2022, unless they cancel and restart their account. These customers are expected to start being billed at the new list price after they renew their current contract. 
 
-**Q: How do the two offerings compare?**
+**Q: How do the two options compare?**
 
 !["A comparison of Data Plus and original data option"](./images/data-plus-comparison.png "A comparison of Data Plus and original data option")