Bit of a rewrite

src/content/docs/codestream/start-here/sign-up-codestream.mdx

@@ -3,13 +3,9 @@ title: Sign up for CodeStream
 description: "An overview of CodeStream's accounts and organizations and how to set those up for your team."
 ---
 
-To get the most out of New Relic CodeStream's collaboration tools, create an
-organization and then invite your team members to it. 
-
-If you haven't already, [sign up for a free New Relic
-account](https://newrelic.com/signup) to jump from your application's stack
-trace errors in New Relic One directly to the line of code responsible in your
-IDE.
+Getting started with CodeStream is easy. The signup process will take you
+through creating an account, creating or joining an organization, and then
+inviting your teammates.
 
 ## Create an account [#account]
 
@@ -19,29 +15,35 @@ process from the CodeStream pane.
 
 ![Create an account](./images/CreateAnAccount6.png)
 
-You can sign up using your email address and a password, or you can sign up using
-your GitHub, GitLab, or Bitbucket account. If you're a New Relic customer, you can also sign up with a user api
-key from your New Relic One account.
+There are three options for signing up:
 
-If the email address you're using with your code host isn't your work email, you
-should sign up with your work email address instead.
+* Enter your work email address and a password 
+* Authenticate using your GitHub, GitLab, or Bitbucket account
+* New Relic customers can sign up with a New Relic user api key
 
-Once you've signed up, we'll send a confirmation code to your email.
+If you signed up using your email address, we'll send a confirmation code to your email.
 
 ![Confirm Email](./images/EmailConfirmation1.png)
 
 ## Create or join an organization [#create-org]
 
-A CodeStream organization is where you and your teammates will discuss and
-collaborate on code, and all of the developers in your company can be in the
-same CodeStream organization. If you're a New Relic customer, note that your
-CodeStream organization is not connected in any way to your New Relic
-organization.
+Now that you've signed up, the next step is to either join or create a
+CodeStream organization. A CodeStream organization is where you and your
+teammates will discuss and collaborate on code, and all of the developers in
+your company can be in the same CodeStream organization. If you're a New Relic
+customer, note that your CodeStream organization is not connected in any way to
+your New Relic organization.
+
+If you were invited to join CodeStream, as long as you sign up using the email
+address the invitation was sent to, you'll automatically be added to that
+organization. There's nothing else you need to do.
 
-If you're invited to join an organization on CodeStream, sign up with the same
-email address the invitation was sent to and you'll automatically be added to
-that organization. Alternatively, there may be existing CodeStream organizations
-available for you to join based on your email domain.
+Even if you weren't invited it's still possible that you may be able to join an
+existing CodeStream organization. If your company already has an organization on
+CodeStream, the admin for that organization may allow anyone using an email
+address on your company's domain to join the organization without being invited.
+If this is the case, once you've signed up you'll see that organization listed
+for you to join.
 
 ![Create or join an organization](./images/CreateOrJoinOrg.png)
 
@@ -50,14 +52,17 @@ a new organization will be created for you.
 
 ## Invite your teammates [#invite]
 
-Invite your teammates to join your CodeStream organization so that you discuss
-and review code with them.
+Now that you're part of a CodeStream orgtanization, the last step is to invite
+your teammates to join the organization so that you can discuss and review code
+with them.
 
 ![Invite teammates](./images/InviteTeammates.png)
 
 CodeStream will offer up some suggestions based on the commit history of the
-repositories you have open in your IDE. You can also indicate that anyone with
-an email address on your company's domain can join your organization without
-needing to be invited.
+repositories you have open in your IDE. If you didn't join an existing
+organization, and instead created one, you are automatically an admin for the
+new organization and this invitation step will include an optiom to allow anyone
+with an email address on your company's domain to join without needing to be
+invited.
 
 Now you're ready to start using CodeStream.