Merge pull request #13139 from newrelic/rum-clarifications

chore(style guide): Clarify RUM guidance
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diff --git a/src/content/docs/new-relic-solutions/get-started/glossary.mdx b/src/content/docs/new-relic-solutions/get-started/glossary.mdx
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ Whether you're considering New Relic or you're already using our capabilities, t
     id="browser-monitoring"
     title="Browser monitoring"
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-    A [Real User Monitoring (RUM) solution](/docs/browser/browser-monitoring/getting-started/introduction-browser-monitoring) that measures the speed and performance of your end users as they navigate to your site from different web browsers, devices, operating systems, and networks.
+    Measures the speed and performance of your end users as they navigate to your site from different web browsers, devices, operating systems, and networks. For more information, see [Introduction to browser monitoring](/docs/browser/browser-monitoring/getting-started/introduction-browser-monitoring/).
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diff --git a/src/content/docs/style-guide/capitalization/product-capability-feature-usage.mdx b/src/content/docs/style-guide/capitalization/product-capability-feature-usage.mdx
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-        A feature of application performance monitoring (APM) and is used to track and measure the end-user experience in an application.
+        see [Usage dictionary # Real user monitoring](/docs/style-guide/word-choice/usage-dictionary/#real-user-monitoring)
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diff --git a/src/content/docs/style-guide/word-choice/usage-dictionary.mdx b/src/content/docs/style-guide/word-choice/usage-dictionary.mdx
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ See [our glossary entry for quickstart](/docs/new-relic-solutions/get-started/gl
     id="real-user-monitoring"
     title="real user monitoring (RUM)"
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-    Don't use this outside of browser monitoring docs. Often abbreviated as RUM, this is a generic industry term for browser monitoring. New Relic refers to this as `page load timing` or `browser monitoring`. Use this term only for SEO or clarification, not to refer to the actual feature.
+    Don't use this outside of browser monitoring docs. Often abbreviated as RUM, this is a generic industry term for browser monitoring. New Relic usually refers to this as `page load timing` or `browser monitoring`. Use this term only for SEO or clarification, not to refer to the actual feature.
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