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data/tutorials/gs_03_ocaml_on_windows.md

@@ -9,12 +9,12 @@ date: 2021-05-27T21:07:30-00:00
 
 # OCaml on Windows
 
-We recommend installing Opam 2.2 for new users; it comes with full Windows support.
+We recommend installing opam 2.2 for new users; it comes with full Windows support.
 
 There are a couple scenarios when other OCaml installers may be useful:
 
-* when you want **to develop applications and either are unfamiliar with Unix or care more about stability and ease-of-use than the latest compiler** you can use [Diskuv OCaml](#diskuv-ocaml)
-* when you want **only to run, not develop, applications** you can use [Docker](#docker-images) or [WSL2](#wsl2)
+* when you want **to develop applications and either are unfamiliar with Unix or care more about stability and ease-of-use than the latest compiler**, you can use [Diskuv OCaml](#diskuv-ocaml)
+* when you want **only to run, not develop, applications**, you can use [Docker](#docker-images) or [WSL2](#wsl2)
 
 The recommendations are based on the availability table below:
 * Tier 1 is fully supported with the latest compilers
@@ -38,18 +38,17 @@ The recommendations are based on the availability table below:
 
 Diskuv OCaml ("DKML") is a distribution of OCaml that supports software development in pure OCaml.
 The distribution is unique in its:
-* full compatibility with OCaml standards like Opam, Dune and ocamlfind
-* focus on "native" development (desktop software, mobile apps and embedded software) through support for the standard native compilers
-  like Visual Studio and Xcode
-* ease-of-use through simplified installers and simple productivity commands; high school, college and university students should be
+* full compatibility with OCaml standards like opam, Dune, and OCamlfind.
+* focus on "native" development (desktop software, mobile apps, and embedded software) through support for the standard native compilers,
+  like Visual Studio and Xcode.
+* ease-of-use through simplified installers and simple productivity commands. High school, college, and university students should be
   able to use it
-* security through reproducibility, versioning and from-source builds
+* security through reproducibility, versioning, and from-source builds.
 
 To install DKML, briefly review the following:
 
-* You need to **stay at your computer** and press "Yes" for any Windows security popups;
-  after the DKML installer finishes installing two programs (`Visual Studio Installer`
-  and `Git for Windows`) you can leave your computer for the remaining one (1) hour.
+* You need to **stay at your computer** and press "Yes" for any Windows security popups. After the DKML installer finishes installing two programs (`Visual Studio Installer`
+  and `Git for Windows`), you can leave your computer for the remaining one (1) hour.
 
 * First time installations may get a notification printed in red. If you see it, reboot your computer and then restart your installation so that Visual Studio Installer can complete. The notification looks like:
 
@@ -130,14 +129,14 @@ easier way to get a working Windows environment on your machine.
 
 ### Visual Studio Code on Windows
 
-**If you use the recommended DKML installer** you will need to:
+**If you use the recommended DKML installer**, you will need to:
 1. Go to `File` > `Preferences` > `Settings` view (or press `Ctrl ,`)
 2. Select `User` > `Extensions` > `OCaml Platform`
 3. **Uncheck** `OCaml: Use OCaml Env`
 
-**If you use WSL2** you will remotely connect to your WSL2 instance from
+**If you use WSL2**, you will remotely connect to your WSL2 instance from
 Visual Studio Code. Microsoft has a [useful blog post](https://code.visualstudio.com/blogs/2019/09/03/wsl2)
-covering getting WSL2 and Visual Studio Code connected.
+that covers getting WSL2 and Visual Studio Code connected.
 
 ### Vim and Emacs on Windows