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[IMP] general: iot windows iot update process #8361
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Can you each look at this PR when you have a moment? There should only be minor changes as this copy has been rearranged for re-installation from the Windows installation page, which was recently updated. Thanks in advance for your help on this doc! Tim 👍 |
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@tiku-odoo I've finished my review of this PR. Great job! I only had a few suggestions for you to accept/reject as you see fit - I'm approving this PR for the next round.
Let me know if you have any questions about my comments. Thanks!
Can you review these changes when you have a moment? |
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This PR is ready for your review when you have a moment. Thanks, 👍 |
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@ksc-odoo This is a mashup of the Windows IOT doc. The focus here is upgrading (not installation). Ready for your review when you have some time. Thanks, |
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looks good on my end!
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hey @tiku-odoo -- just finished my Final Review of this PR. Once you implement the necessary changes, tag me again for another quick look. Thanks! 👍
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This doc is ready for another look! Thanks, |
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Great work implementing the previously-suggested changes, @tiku-odoo -- there are only a handful of minor adjustments that require your attention. But, I'm going to 'approve' now, because I don't think you'll have any issues implementing them during this round of revision. Once you think it's ready, you can tag it for Tech Review. Thanks! 👍
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This doc is ready for your review when you have a moment. Thanks, |
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I've added an additional admonition block to address @lse-odoo comments. This is ready for your review now. Thanks, |
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Hi @tiku-odoo, nice job on this improvement PR. I have a few suggestions and corrections, please see below and my comment about the uninstallation notice.
Also, please update the commit message to have a space after the colon :)
Let me know your thoughts on the rephrasing, and tag me for another look once this PR is ready. Thank you!
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I've made the requested changes; thanks for your help streamlining it. Ready for a final review. Thanks, |
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Nice @tiku-odoo, thanks for implementing the suggestions from my previous review! I have just a couple more quick fixes that I will push up after this review to move this PR along. Thank you!
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.. important:: | ||
Before uninstalling a previous version of the Windows virtual :abbr:`IoT (Internet of Things)` | ||
box, ensure that there is a newer version of Odoo's virtual :abbr:`IoT (Internet of Things)` box |
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this is referred to throughout as Windows virtual IoT box, so just changing to be consistent
box, ensure that there is a newer version of Odoo's virtual :abbr:`IoT (Internet of Things)` box | |
box, ensure that there is a newer version of Windows virtual :abbr:`IoT (Internet of Things)` box |
--> Windows` to view the date next to the :file:`odoo_(version).latest.exe` file. *(version)* is | ||
equal to the version of Odoo (e.g. 16.0, 17.0). The latest version of the Windows virtual | ||
:abbr:`IoT (Internet of Things)` box can be downloaded by selecting this file, or it is always | ||
available at the `Odoo Download <https://odoo.com/download/>`_ page. |
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Matching the UI and fixing the sentence
--> Windows` to view the date next to the :file:`odoo_(version).latest.exe` file. *(version)* is | |
equal to the version of Odoo (e.g. 16.0, 17.0). The latest version of the Windows virtual | |
:abbr:`IoT (Internet of Things)` box can be downloaded by selecting this file, or it is always | |
available at the `Odoo Download <https://odoo.com/download/>`_ page. | |
--> windows/` to view the date next to the :file:`odoo_(version).latest.exe` file; where | |
*(version)* is equal to the version of Odoo (e.g. 16.0, 17.0). The latest version of the Windows | |
virtual :abbr:`IoT (Internet of Things)` box can be downloaded by selecting this file, or it is | |
always available at the `Odoo Download <https://odoo.com/download/>`_ page. |
(stable version) --> Windows` to and select the :file:`odoo_(version).latest.exe` file. *(version)* | ||
is equal to the version of Odoo (e.g. 16.0, 17.0). |
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Matching UI and fixing sentence
(stable version) --> Windows` to and select the :file:`odoo_(version).latest.exe` file. *(version)* | |
is equal to the version of Odoo (e.g. 16.0, 17.0). | |
(stable version) --> windows/` to and select the :file:`odoo_(version).latest.exe` file; where | |
*(version)* is equal to the version of Odoo (e.g. 16.0, 17.0). |
To download from the :guilabel:`Odoo Download` page, find the :guilabel:`Odoo 16` section, or a | ||
version higher (depending on what version the database is), and select the :guilabel:`Download` | ||
button for :guilabel:`Windows`. |
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Can be simplified to
To download from the :guilabel:`Odoo Download` page, find the :guilabel:`Odoo 16` section, or a | |
version higher (depending on what version the database is), and select the :guilabel:`Download` | |
button for :guilabel:`Windows`. | |
To download from the :guilabel:`Odoo Download` page, find the section for the version of Odoo (e.g. | |
16.0, 17.0), and select the :guilabel:`Download` button for :guilabel:`Windows`. |
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Implemented my changes in 0e09ebf, approving. Thank you @tiku-odoo 👍
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@robodoo r+
closes #8361 Signed-off-by: Samuel Lieber (sali) <sali@odoo.com>
Original Task : https://www.odoo.com/web#id=3747344&cids=3&menu_id=4720&action=333&active_id=3835&model=project.task&view_type=form
Incremental Task:
https://www.odoo.com/web#id=3827228&cids=3&menu_id=4720&action=333&active_id=3835&model=project.task&view_type=form