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6 changes: 3 additions & 3 deletions content/en/docs/concepts/data-collection.md
Expand Up @@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ The OpenTelemetry project facilitates the collection of telemetry data via the
OpenTelemetry Collector. The OpenTelemetry Collector offers a vendor-agnostic
implementation on how to receive, process, and export telemetry data. It removes
the need to run, operate, and maintain multiple agents/collectors in order to
support open-source observability data formats (e.g. Jaeger, Prometheus, etc.)
sending to one or more open-source or commercial back-ends. In addition, the
support open source observability data formats (e.g. Jaeger, Prometheus, etc.)
sending to one or more open source or commercial back-ends. In addition, the
Collector gives end-users control of their data. The Collector is the default
location instrumentation libraries export their telemetry data.

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receivers, processors, exporters, and extensions.
- **[Contrib](https://github.com/open-telemetry/opentelemetry-collector-contrib/releases):**
All the components of core plus optional or possibly experimental components.
Offers support for popular open-source projects including Jaeger, Prometheus,
Offers support for popular open source projects including Jaeger, Prometheus,
and Fluent Bit. Also contains more specialized or vendor-specific receivers,
processors, exporters, and extensions.
2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion content/en/docs/concepts/signals/traces.md
Expand Up @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ Providers. In some languages, a global Tracer is already initialized for you.

Trace Exporters send traces to a consumer. This consumer can be standard output
for debugging and development-time, the OpenTelemetry Collector, or any
open-source or vendor backend of your choice.
open source or vendor backend of your choice.

### Trace Context

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Expand Up @@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ must emit [traces](/docs/concepts/observability-primer/#distributed-traces),
[metrics](/docs/concepts/observability-primer/#reliability--metrics), and
[logs](/docs/concepts/observability-primer/#logs). The instrumented data must
then be sent to an Observability back-end. There are a number of Observability
back-ends out there, ranging from self-hosted open-source tools (e.g.
back-ends out there, ranging from self-hosted open source tools (e.g.
[Jaeger](https://www.jaegertracing.io/) and [Zipkin](https://zipkin.io/)), to
commercial SAAS offerings.
commercial SaaS offerings.

In the past, the way in which code was instrumented would vary, as each
Observability back-end would have its own instrumentation libraries and agents
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> and the burden on the user to maintain instrumentation libraries.
Recognizing the need for standardization, the cloud community came together, and
two open-source projects were born: [OpenTracing](https://opentracing.io) (a
two open source projects were born: [OpenTracing](https://opentracing.io) (a
[Cloud Native Computing Foundation (CNCF)](https://www.cncf.io) project) and
[OpenCensus](https://opencensus.io) (a
[Google Open Source](https://opensource.google) community project).
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OTel's goal is to provide a set of standardized vendor-agnostic SDKs, APIs, and
[tools](/docs/collector) for ingesting, transforming, and sending data to an
Observability back-end (i.e. open-source or commercial vendor).
Observability back-end (i.e. open source or commercial vendor).

## What can OpenTelemetry do for me?

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formats in parallel to assist with migrating as standards evolve.
- A path forward no matter where you are on your observability journey.

With support for a variety of [open-source and commercial
With support for a variety of [open source and commercial
protocols][otel-collector-contrib], format and context propagation mechanisms as
well as providing shims to the OpenTracing and OpenCensus projects, it is easy
to adopt OpenTelemetry.

## What OpenTelemetry is not

OpenTelemetry is not an observability back-end like Jaeger or Prometheus.
Instead, it supports exporting data to a variety of open-source and commercial
Instead, it supports exporting data to a variety of open source and commercial
back-ends. It provides a pluggable architecture so additional technology
protocols and formats can be easily added.

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