Additional revisions to acct stgs and profile page

en_us/students/source/SFD_your_information.rst

@@ -20,7 +20,9 @@ course teams and the other learners in the courses that you take can view your
 profile.
 
 You can view and change your basic, additional, and profile information at any
-time. 
+time. You access your information by selecting the arrow next to your username
+in the upper-right corner of any edX page and then selecting either **Account
+Settings** or **My Profile**.
 
 You can also link your edX account to your Facebook or Google account. When you
 link your accounts, you can sign in to edX automatically by signing in to
@@ -45,8 +47,9 @@ is required for every account on edX.
   Password**. EdX then sends a message to the email address in the **Email
   Address** field. You click the link in the message to finish resetting your
   password.
-* **Language**: The language used throughout the edX site. The edX site is currently
+* **Language**: The language that the edX site uses during your visits. The edX site is currently
   available in a limited number of languages.
+* **Country or Region**: The country or region that you live in.
 
 To view or change this information, follow these steps.
 
@@ -67,53 +70,78 @@ Specify Additional Information
 Additional account information is optional and helps edX to offer more and
 better courses.
 
-* Education Completed
-* Gender
-* Year of Birth 
-* Country or Region
-* Preferred Language
+* **Education Completed**: The highest level of education that you have completed.
+* **Gender**: The gender you identify as.
+* **Year of Birth**: The year that you were born.  
+* **Preferred Language**: The language that you speak most frequently or that
+  you prefer to communicate in.
 
 To view or change this information, follow these steps.
 
 #. On any edX page, click the arrow next to your username in the upper-right
    corner, and then select **Account Settings**.
 #. On the **Account Settings** page, locate the **Additional Information
    (optional)** section.
-#. To add or change your information, click its associated field, and then
-   enter new text in the field or select a new option from a list. Your
-   changes are saved automatically.
+#. To add or change your information, hover the mouse pointer over the field
+   for the information that you want to add or change. 
 
-.. _SFD Profile Page:
+   If you have not added information to the field, the field appears
+   highlighted and surrounded by a dashed line.
+
+   .. image:: /Images/SFD_Prof_Add_Info.png
+    :width: 300
+    :alt: A profile page with the "Add language" highlighted and surrounded by a dashed line
+
+   If the field already has information, the field appears highlighted, and a
+   pencil icon appears in the upper-right corner.
+
+   .. image:: /Images/SFD_Prof_Edit_Info.png
+    :width: 500
+    :alt: A profile page with the "About Me" field highlighted
+
+#. Click inside the field, and then either enter text in the field or select a
+   new option from a list.
+
+Your changes are saved automatically.
 
-******************************
-Create or Edit an edX Profile
-******************************
+.. _SFD Profile Page:
 
-.. Do we want to tell learners how to find and see other users'
-.. profiles? Is there a page or directory for this?
+*************************************
+View, Create, or Edit an edX Profile
+*************************************
 
 Your edX profile allows you to share information about yourself, including an
-image, with the edX community. Your profile can be a limited profile or a full
-profile.
+image, with the edX community. You can share a limited profile that just
+includes your username and image, or you can share a full profile that
+includes biographical information.
+
+.. image:: /Images/SFD_ViewOwnProfile.png
+ :width: 500
+ :alt: A learner's full profile with location, language, and short biographical paragraph
+
+.. note:: Learners under 13 years of age can only share a limited profile.
 
-* A limited profile includes the following information. Only your
+================================
+Create or Edit Your edX Profile
+================================
+
+Your profile can be a limited profile or a full profile.
+
+* A limited profile can include the following information. Only your
   username is required.
 
   * Your username.
   * An image that you select to identify you on the edX site.
 
-* A full profile includes the following information. Only your username is required.
+* A full profile can include the following information. Only your username is
+  required.
 
   * Your username.
   * An image that you select to identify you on the edX site.
   * Your country or region.
   * Your preferred language.
   * A paragraph about yourself.
 
-.. image:: /Images/SFD_ViewOwnProfile.png
- :width: 500
- :alt: A student's profile with location, language, and short biographical paragraph
-
 To create or edit your profile, follow these steps.
 
 #. On any edX page, click the arrow next to your username in the upper-right
@@ -129,7 +157,7 @@ To create or edit your profile, follow these steps.
    saved automatically.
 
    .. note:: You must specify your year of birth on the **Account Settings** page 
-     before you share a full profile. If you are under age 14, you can only
+     before you share a full profile. If you are under age 13, you can only
      share a limited profile.
 
    * Add an image that you want to associate with your edX username.
@@ -149,6 +177,28 @@ To create or edit your profile, follow these steps.
  are not visible on your profile page. However, this information is saved. To
  make this information visible again, select **Full Profile**.
 
+================================
+View Another Learner's Profile
+================================
+
+You view other learners' profiles through the course discussions.
+
+#. On the **Discussion** tab, select the username of any learner in an
+   original post, a response, or a comment.
+#. When the **Active Threads** page for that learner opens, select the
+   learner's username in the upper-left corner of the page.
+
+The following image shows a learner's username in an original post, the
+learner's username on the **Active Threads** page, and the learner's profile
+page.
+
+.. image:: /Images/SFD_Prof_from_Disc.png
+  :width: 600
+  :alt: Image of a discussion with a learner's username circled, an image of
+      that learner's active threads page in the course discussions, and an
+      image of the learner's profile
+
+
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