Merge pull request Open-Advice#51 from ototo/documentationsupport_fixes

Documentationsupport fixes

documentationsupport/AtulJha.tex

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
 I started reading the book and to my surprise the definition of hacker was
 ``someone who likes solving problems and overcoming limits''. It also said
-``hackers build things, crackers break them.'' Alas I wanted to be a cracker but
+``hackers build things, crackers break them.'' Alas I wanted to be a cracker, but
 this book brought me to the other world of hacking. I kept reading the book and
 encountered various new terms like GNU/Linux, mailing list, Linux user group,
 IRC, Python and many more. 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 One fine day I got an email about a monthly Linux user group meetup. I
 needed answers for my many questions. I met Karunakar there and he
 asked me to bring my computer to his office as he had the whole Debian
-repository available there. Debian was new for me but I was
+repository available there. Debian was new for me, but I was
 satisfied with the fact that finally I will be able to play music on
 Linux. The next day I was in his office after carrying my computer on the
 over-crowded bus -- it was fun. In a few hours, Debian was up and running on my
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 many others for sure. After all these years in the Free Software
 community, I have realized documentation is the key for participation
 of newbies in this awesome Open Source community. My 1\$ advice to all
-developers would be to please document even the smallest work you do as the world
-is full of newbies who would love to read it. My blog has even simple
-postings like enabling the spell checker in OpenOffice to installing Django
-in a virtual environment.
+developers would be: please document even the smallest work you do as the world
+is full of newbies who would love to understand it. My blog has a wide range of
+postings, from simple ones like enabling the spell checker in OpenOffice
+to ones about installing Django in a virtual environment.

documentationsupport/RichBowen.tex

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ \section*{Laziness}
 \section*{Patience}
 There is a tendency in the technical documentation world to be impatient and
 belligerent. The sources of this impatience are numerous. Some people feel that,
-since they had to work hard to figure this stuff out, you should to. Many of us
+since they had to work hard to figure this stuff out, you should too. Many of us
 in the technical world are self-taught, and we have very little patience for
 people who come after us and want a quick road to success.