Gramatical precision in Normative Specifications

Addressing concerns around the grammatical precision of the Normative Specifications section.
patcg · Dec 5, 2022 · 8e484f8 · 8e484f8
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           </p>
           <ul>
             <li>Pre-campaign planning</li>
-            <li>Intra-campaign decisioning and optimization</li>
+            <li>Intra-campaign decisioning and optimization, such as:</li>
             <ul>
-              <li>Interest-based ad or content decisioning</li>
-              <li>User List Marketing/Remarketing</li>
-              <li>Fraud detection and prevention</li>
-              <li>Abuse detection and prevention</li>
-              <li>Frequency and recency controls</li>
-              <li>Error reporting and mitigation </li>
-              <li>Device resource management</li>
+              <li>Interest-based ad or content decisioning;</li>
+              <li>User List Marketing/Remarketing;</li>
+              <li>Fraud detection and prevention;</li>
+              <li>Abuse detection and prevention;</li>
+              <li>Frequency and recency controls;</li>
+              <li>Error reporting and mitigation; and </li>
+              <li>Device resource management.</li>
               </ul>
             <li>Post-campaign reporting and attribution
           </ul>