Fix wording on Firefox sync #1198
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| [Firefox Sync](https://hacks.mozilla.org/2018/11/firefox-sync-privacy/) allows your browsing data (history, bookmarks, etc.) to be accessible on all your devices. It is fully E2EE, so it should be safe to use. | |||
| [Firefox Sync](https://hacks.mozilla.org/2018/11/firefox-sync-privacy/) allows your browsing data (history, bookmarks, etc.) to be accessible on all your devices. It is fully E2EE. | |||
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"It is fully E2EE." to me, sounds a bit weird, maybe somehow "integrate" that into the previous sentence?
Something like
... to be accessible on all your devices while using E2EE.
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Yeah I agree, maybe "Firefox Sync allows your browsing data (history, bookmarks, etc.) to be accessible on all your devices and protects it with E2EE."
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Resolves: #1196
"it should be safe to use" makes it sound like we're unsure about recommending it. Removed this part so it is shorter and more confident.