Review Ticket for 'De HTML a lista de palabras (parte 2)' - Spanish translation

[acrymble]

The Programming Historian has received the following translation on 'De HTML a lista de palabras (parte 2)' by @vgayolrs . This lesson is now under review and can be read at:

http://programminghistorian.org/es/lecciones/de-html-a-lista-de-palabras-2

I will act as editor for the review process. My role is to manage the discussions between the reviewers ( @arojascastro and @mariajoafana) and the author ( @vgayolrs ), which should be held here on this forum.

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[mariajoafana]

Línea 27: la palabra "añade" está repetida
Línea 39: corregir "cadema"
Línea 43: mayúscula después de punto en "le dimos"
"porque no tiene" está repetido dos veces
Sugiero cambiar "si nos hubiéramos sentido tentados" por "si hubiéramos querido".
Línea 52: renglón 4. "angular" en vez de "angula"
Línea 61, (,) coma después de "if"
Línea 70: (,) coma después de "primera"
Línea 90: penúltimo renglón, eliminar espacio de más entre "si no"
Línea 126: penúltimo renglón, eliminar espacio de más antes de "Si..."
Línea 182: renglón 3, separar "cosasreferirse"

[arojascastro]

• L 43: en sucesión. le dimos --> something is wrong here
• L 43: porque no tiene porque no tiene --> repetido
• L 53: angula --> angular
• L 61: if --> if (cursiva)
• L 86: caracter --> carácter
• L 87: caracter --> carácter
• L 90: if / elif --> if / elif (cursiva)
• L 94: Toma en cuenta --> Ten en cuenta (?)
• L 124: caracter --> carácter
• L 141: Toma en cuenta --> something different (por ejemplo, Recuerda o no olvides o Ten presente)
• L 169: que tal mundo --> qué tal mundo
• L 182: caroo --> carro
• L 182: cosasreferir --> cosas referir
• L 182: que tal mundo! --> qué tal mundo!

[acrymble]

Please make sure only the editor closes a review ticket. No one told me this was ready for my check so I had left it open. If anyone other than the editor closes it then we have no control over quality checking. As it stands it didn't have the reviewer's names added to it.

[acrymble]

I've added the translation reviewers to this. It's now published.