Damn, I was worried someone might like this

draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

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 --- abstract
 
-This document defines the core of the QUIC transport protocol. QUIC provides
-streams for structuring application data, flow control,
-low-latency connection establishment, network path migration, and uses
-authenticated encryption for most protocol data. Accompanying documents describe
-the integration of TLS for key negotiation, loss detection, and an exemplary
+This document defines the core of the QUIC transport protocol.  QUIC provides
+applications with flow-controlled streams for structured communication,
+low-latency connection establishment, and network path migration. QUIC includes
+security measures that ensure confidentiality, integrity, and availability in a
+range of deployment circumstances.  Accompanying documents describe the
+integration of TLS for key negotiation, loss detection, and an exemplary
 congestion control algorithm.