@hardie's excellent suggestion for rewording

quicwg · Sep 25, 2018 · 4e572fb · 4e572fb
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@@ -128,10 +128,10 @@ general-purpose secure transport for multiple applications.
 
 * Connection migration and resilience to NAT rebinding
 
-QUIC uses UDP as a substrate to avoid changes to legacy client operating
-systems and middleboxes in order to be deployed.  QUIC authenticates all of
-its headers and encrypts most of the data it exchanges, including its signaling.
-This allows the protocol to evolve without incurring a dependency on upgrades to
+QUIC uses UDP as a substrate to avoid requiring changes in legacy client
+operating systems and middleboxes.  QUIC authenticates all of its headers and
+encrypts most of the data it exchanges, including its signaling.  This allows
+the protocol to evolve without incurring a dependency on upgrades to
 middleboxes.
 
 This document describes the core QUIC protocol, including the conceptual design,