Address more review comments

quicwg · Jul 28, 2020 · 71edf40 · 71edf40
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diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md
@@ -5278,11 +5278,11 @@ Largest Acknowledged:
 ACK Delay:
 
 : A variable-length integer representing the time delta in microseconds between
-  when the ACK frame was sent and when the largest acknowledged packet, as
-  indicated in the Largest Acknowledged field, was received by this peer.  This
-  acknowledgement delay in the ACK Delay field is scaled by multiplying the
-  encoded value by 2 to the power of the value of the ack_delay_exponent
-  transport parameter set by the sender of the ACK frame; see
+  when largest acknowledged packet, as indicated in the Largest Acknowledged
+  field, was received and the ACK frame was sent. The ACK Delay field carries
+  this encoded time delta. It is decoded by multiplying the value in the ACK
+  Delay field by 2 to the power of the value of the ack_delay_exponent transport
+  parameter set by the sender of the ACK frame; see
   {{transport-parameter-definitions}}.  Scaling in this fashion allows for a
   larger range of values with a shorter encoding at the cost of lower
   resolution.  Because the receiver doesn't use the value in the ACK Delay field