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Co-Authored-By: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
quicwg · Oct 22, 2019 · 79a9a7c · 79a9a7c
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diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md b/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
@@ -1336,7 +1336,7 @@ protocol incompatible with the protocol version being used.
 ## QUIC Transport Parameters Extension {#quic_parameters}
 
 QUIC transport parameters are carried in a TLS extension. Different versions of
-QUIC might define a different format for them.
+QUIC might define a different method for negotiating transport configuration.
 
 Including transport parameters in the TLS handshake provides integrity
 protection for these values.

diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md
@@ -4379,7 +4379,7 @@ length, value) tuple, as shown in {{transport-parameter-encoding-fig}}:
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
 |  Transport Parameter ID (16)  |
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
-|  Transport Param Length (16)  |
+|  Transport Parameter ID (16)  |  Transport Param Length (16)  |
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
 |                Transport Parameter Value (*)                ...
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+