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@@ -1459,8 +1459,8 @@ <h4 id="name-the-minimum-congestion-wind">
 <a href="#section-3.1.8" class="section-number selfRef">3.1.8. </a><a href="#name-the-minimum-congestion-wind" class="section-name selfRef">The Minimum Congestion Window is Two Packets</a>
           </h4>
 <p id="section-3.1.8-1">TCP uses a minimum congestion window of one packet. However, loss of
-a single packet sent with that window causes the sender to waiting for a PTO
-(<a href="#pto" class="xref">Section 5.2</a>) to recover from that loss, which is much longer than a round trip.
+that single packet means that the sender needs to waiting for a PTO
+(<a href="#pto" class="xref">Section 5.2</a>) to recover, which can be much longer than a round-trip time.
 Sending a single ack-eliciting packet also increases the chances of incurring
 additional latency when a receiver delays its acknowledgement.<a href="#section-3.1.8-1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 <p id="section-3.1.8-2">QUIC therefore recommends that the minimum congestion window be two

ianswett-min-cwnd/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.txt

@@ -397,11 +397,11 @@ Internet-Draft             QUIC Loss Detection                  May 2020
 3.1.8.  The Minimum Congestion Window is Two Packets
 
    TCP uses a minimum congestion window of one packet.  However, loss of
-   a single packet sent with that window causes the sender to waiting
-   for a PTO (Section 5.2) to recover from that loss, which is much
-   longer than a round trip.  Sending a single ack-eliciting packet also
-   increases the chances of incurring additional latency when a receiver
-   delays its acknowledgement.
+   that single packet means that the sender needs to waiting for a PTO
+   (Section 5.2) to recover, which can be much longer than a round-trip
+   time.  Sending a single ack-eliciting packet also increases the
+   chances of incurring additional latency when a receiver delays its
+   acknowledgement.
 
    QUIC therefore recommends that the minimum congestion window be two
    packets.  While this increases network load, it is considered safe,