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Erik Kline's Transport Comment 3 #4515

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LPardue opened this issue Jan 6, 2021 · 0 comments · Fixed by #4581
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Erik Kline's Transport Comment 3 #4515

LPardue opened this issue Jan 6, 2021 · 0 comments · Fixed by #4581
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LPardue commented Jan 6, 2021

Erik Kline said:

[ section 9.7 ]

  • "as this would enable..." reads to me like the opposite of what's intended.
    Perhaps: "as failure to do so would enable..."?
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This "this" was just confusing
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The text was probably backwards, but rather than invert it, remove the
indirect reference to the subject of the claim and be explicit.

Closes #4515.
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This "this" was just confusing quicwg/base-drafts
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