Reword linkability on migration text #1369
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| activity from the same connection on different networks. Protection of packet | ||
| numbers ensures that packet numbers cannot be used to correlate activity. Other | ||
| properties of packets, such as timing and size, might be used to correlate | ||
| activity, but these changes ensure that the packet header cannot be used. | ||
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"but these changes" is a bit vague - how about "but using a path unique connection ID enures ..."
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Looks good to me, but I agree with @mikkelfj, "but these changes" is loose text and wont stand well after another change or three.
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Closes #1364.