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Ekr editorial 17 http #2204
Ekr editorial 17 http #2204
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Any invalid frame is handled this way, so this is redundant.
specific instance for SETTINGS.
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Mostly good, but some minor nits. Is it possible not to rewrap things to a smaller size? Otherwise, I'll go through and rewrap before merging.
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@@ -324,7 +325,7 @@ transport parameter `initial_max_uni_streams`. | |||
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If the stream header indicates a stream type which is not supported by the | |||
recipient, the remainder of the stream cannot be consumed as the semantics are | |||
unknown. Recipients of unknown stream types MAY trigger a QUIC STOP_SENDING | |||
unknown. Recipients of unknown stream types MAY send a QUIC STOP_SENDING |
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The use of "trigger" is deliberate, since an HTTP implementation cannot directly send transport frames. It can ask the transport implementation to do so.
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treated as a stream error of type HTTP_MALFORMED_FRAME. Likewise, a PRIORITY | ||
frame sent on a control stream with the Prioritized Element Type set to `11` | ||
MUST be treated as a connection error of type HTTP_MALFORMED_FRAME. | ||
Note that unlike in {{!RFC7540}}; the root of the tree cannot be |
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I don't think this should be a semicolon.
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- Complete processing of a header block | |||
- Abandonment of a stream which might have remaining header blocks | |||
- Receipt of new dynamic table entries | |||
- Receipt of new dynamic table entries (Table State Synchronize) |
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Why specify the instruction for this event, but not for the others? This ought to be consistent.
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@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ initial maximum table size is the value of the setting in the peer's SETTINGS | |||
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Before a new entry is added to the dynamic table, entries are evicted from the | |||
end of the dynamic table until the size of the dynamic table is less than or | |||
end the dynamic table until the size of the dynamic table is less than or |
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"end of" is correct
M-x set-variable fill-column 80 |
Oops -- I tried to merge this manually and wound up pulling junk into the branch. Fixing. |
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