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Ekr editorial 17 http #2204

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@ekr ekr commented Dec 18, 2018

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Mostly good, but some minor nits. Is it possible not to rewrap things to a smaller size? Otherwise, I'll go through and rewrap before merging.

@@ -324,7 +325,7 @@ transport parameter `initial_max_uni_streams`.

If the stream header indicates a stream type which is not supported by the
recipient, the remainder of the stream cannot be consumed as the semantics are
unknown. Recipients of unknown stream types MAY trigger a QUIC STOP_SENDING
unknown. Recipients of unknown stream types MAY send a QUIC STOP_SENDING
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The use of "trigger" is deliberate, since an HTTP implementation cannot directly send transport frames. It can ask the transport implementation to do so.

treated as a stream error of type HTTP_MALFORMED_FRAME. Likewise, a PRIORITY
frame sent on a control stream with the Prioritized Element Type set to `11`
MUST be treated as a connection error of type HTTP_MALFORMED_FRAME.
Note that unlike in {{!RFC7540}}; the root of the tree cannot be
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I don't think this should be a semicolon.

@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ permit the encoder to track the decoder's state. These events are:

- Complete processing of a header block
- Abandonment of a stream which might have remaining header blocks
- Receipt of new dynamic table entries
- Receipt of new dynamic table entries (Table State Synchronize)
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Why specify the instruction for this event, but not for the others? This ought to be consistent.

@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ initial maximum table size is the value of the setting in the peer's SETTINGS
frame.

Before a new entry is added to the dynamic table, entries are evicted from the
end of the dynamic table until the size of the dynamic table is less than or
end the dynamic table until the size of the dynamic table is less than or
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"end of" is correct

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M-x set-variable fill-column 80

@martinthomson martinthomson added editorial An issue that does not affect the design of the protocol; does not require consensus. -http labels Dec 24, 2018
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MikeBishop commented Jan 9, 2019

Oops -- I tried to merge this manually and wound up pulling junk into the branch. Fixing.

@MikeBishop MikeBishop merged commit 64585a3 into quicwg:master Jan 9, 2019
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