minor editorial nits in Section 10 (Connection Termination) #4129
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| Violations of the protocol lead to an immediate close, and a transport-level | ||
| error being sent in a CONNECTION_CLOSE frame. |
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| Violations of the protocol lead to an immediate close, and a transport-level | |
| error being sent in a CONNECTION_CLOSE frame. | |
| Violations of the protocol lead to an immediate close, with a transport-level | |
| error being sent in the CONNECTION_CLOSE frame. |
I'm not sure ", and" is the right conjunction here; it sounds like two outcomes.
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