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14 changes: 7 additions & 7 deletions draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md
Expand Up @@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ minimal amount of information that is made available to entities other than
endpoints. Unless specifically prohibited in this document, any aspect of the
protocol can change between different versions.

{{bad-assumptions}} is a non-exhaustive list of some incorrect assumptions that
might be made based on knowledge of QUIC version 1; these do not apply to every
version of QUIC.
{{bad-assumptions}} contains a non-exhaustive list of some incorrect assumptions
that might be made based on knowledge of QUIC version 1; these do not apply to
every version of QUIC.


# Conventions and Definitions
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protected from observation, but are nonetheless considered to be changeable when
a new version is deployed.

This section lists a sampling of incorrect assumptions that might be made based
on knowledge of QUIC version 1. Some of these statements are not even true for
QUIC version 1. This is not an exhaustive list; it is intended to be
illustrative only.
This section lists a sampling of incorrect assumptions that might be made about
QUIC based on knowledge of QUIC version 1. Some of these statements are not
even true for QUIC version 1. This is not an exhaustive list; it is intended to
be illustrative only.

**Any and all of the following statements can be false for a given QUIC
version:**
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