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diff --git a/ekr_editorial_auth48/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.html b/ekr_editorial_auth48/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.html
@@ -1630,8 +1630,8 @@ <h2 id="name-version-downgrade-preventio">
 VERSION_NEGOTIATION_ERROR (see <a href="#iana-error" class="auto internal xref">Section 10.2</a>).<a href="#section-4-4" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 <p id="section-4-5">When a server receives a client's first flight, the server will first
 establish which QUIC version is in use for this connection in order to
-properly parse the first flight. This may involve examining packets
-that are not part of the handshake transcript, such as in the the
+properly parse the first flight. This may involve examining data
+that is not part of the handshake transcript, such as parts of the
 packet header. When the server then processes the client's Version
 Information, the server <span class="bcp14">MUST</span> validate that the client's Chosen Version
 matches the version in use for the connection. If the two differ, the

diff --git a/ekr_editorial_auth48/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.txt b/ekr_editorial_auth48/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.txt
@@ -451,12 +451,12 @@ Table of Contents
 
    When a server receives a client's first flight, the server will first
    establish which QUIC version is in use for this connection in order
-   to properly parse the first flight.  This may involve examining
-   packets that are not part of the handshake transcript, such as in the
-   the packet header.  When the server then processes the client's
-   Version Information, the server MUST validate that the client's
-   Chosen Version matches the version in use for the connection.  If the
-   two differ, the server MUST close the connection with a version
+   to properly parse the first flight.  This may involve examining data
+   that is not part of the handshake transcript, such as parts of the
+   packet header.  When the server then processes the client's Version
+   Information, the server MUST validate that the client's Chosen
+   Version matches the version in use for the connection.  If the two
+   differ, the server MUST close the connection with a version
    negotiation error.
 
    In the specific case of QUIC version 1, the server determines that