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Small Action View Overview guide grammar and readability tweaks #16271

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@alol alol commented Jul 23, 2014

I went through the Action Controller Overview guide making a few small changes to improve its grammar and readability (I hope!)

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Templates, Partials and Layouts
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As mentioned before, the final HTML output is a composition of three Rails elements: `Templates`, `Partials` and `Layouts`.
Below is a brief overview of each one of them.
As mentioned, the final HTML output is composed of three Rails elements: `Templates`, `Partials` and `Layouts`.
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I don't think "composed of" quite captures the meaning here... to me, the final output is made by the three elements, rather than being made of them.

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Ah, yeah, I see. I can't think of a better way of expressing that than the original, so I'll step back to that.

Many thanks for your feedback!

Some small grammar and readability edits
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alol commented Jul 24, 2014

@matthewd – I've made the suggested changes, would you mind taking another look, when you have a chance? 😄

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Small Action View Overview guide grammar and readability tweaks
@vijaydev vijaydev merged commit 6d3cf01 into rails:master Aug 21, 2014
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alol commented Aug 21, 2014

Thanks @vijaydev!

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