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Looks good.
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This is the first chapter in a step-by-step guide about main React concepts. You can find a list of all its chapters in the navigation sidebar. If you're reading this from a mobile device, you can access the navigation by pressing the button in the bottom right corner of your screen.
मुख्य React अवधारणाओं के बारे में चरण-दर-चरण मार्गदर्शिका में यह पहला अध्याय है। आप नेविगेशन साइडबार में इसके सभी अध्यायों की सूची पा सकते हैं। यदि आप इसे मोबाइल डिवाइस से पढ़ रहे हैं, तो आप अपनी स्क्रीन के निचले दाएं कोने में बटन दबाकर नेविगेशन का उपयोग कर सकते हैं।
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Let's change अवधारणाओं to कॉन्सेप्ट्स
अवधारणाओं sounds a bit complex


Every chapter in this guide builds on the knowledge introduced in earlier chapters. **You can learn most of React by reading the “Main Concepts” guide chapters in the order they appear in the sidebar.** For example, [“Introducing JSX”](/docs/introducing-jsx.html) is the next chapter after this one.
इस मार्गदर्शिका का प्रत्येक अध्याय पहले के अध्यायों में प्रस्तुत ज्ञान पर आधारित है। आप वे साइडबार में दिखाई देने वाले “मेन कॉन्सेप्ट्स” गाइड चैप्टर्स को एक क्रम में पढ़कर अधिकांश React को सीख सकते हैं। उदाहरण के लिए, “JSX का परिचय” इस के बाद अगला अध्याय है।
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JSX का परिचय
This has a link in english docs.
This should be ["JSX का परिचय"](/docs/introducing-jsx.html)

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LGTM 🎉
Let's wait for @saranshkataria review.
After that we will get this merged.

permalink: docs/hello-world.html
prev: cdn-links.html
next: introducing-jsx.html
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The smallest React example looks like this:
React का सबसे छोटा उदाहरण इस प्रकार है:
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Instead of इस प्रकार है:, shouldn't it be like aisa dikhta hai?

document.getElementById('root')
);
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It displays a heading saying "Hello, world!" on the page.
यह पृष्ठ पर "नमस्ते, दुनिया!" कहते हुए शीर्षक को दिखाए गा।
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should be पृष्ठ ke शीर्षक par "नमस्ते, दुनिया! dikhega or something like that


[](codepen://hello-world)

Click the link above to open an online editor. Feel free to make some changes, and see how they affect the output. Most pages in this guide will have editable examples like this one.
ऑनलाइन संपादक खोलने के लिए ऊपर दिए गए लिंक पर क्लिक करें। कुछ बदलाव करने के लिए स्वतंत्र महसूस करें, और देखें कि वे आउटपुट को कैसे प्रभावित करते हैं। इस गाइड के अधिकांश पृष्ठों में इस तरह के संपादन योग्य उदाहरण होंगे।
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स्वतंत्र महसूस करें does not feel correct

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संपादन योग्य seems a bit complex translation


In this guide, we will examine the building blocks of React apps: elements and components. Once you master them, you can create complex apps from small reusable pieces.
इस गाइड में, हम React एप्लिकेशन के बिल्डिंग ब्लॉक्स: एलेमेन्त्स् और कौम्पोनॅन्ट्स की जांच करेंगे। एक बार जब आप इसमे महारत हासिल कर लेते हैं, तो आप छोटे पुन: प्रयोज्य टुकड़ों से जटिल एप्लिकेशन बना सकते हैं।
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एलेमेन्त्स् spelling is incorrect

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instead of जटिल, complex in hindi would be better

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पुन: प्रयोज्य टुकड़ों is again a complex translation

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>This guide is designed for people who prefer **learning concepts step by step**. If you prefer to learn by doing, check out our [practical tutorial](/tutorial/tutorial.html). You might find this guide and the tutorial complementary to each other.
>यह मार्गदर्शिका ऐसे लोगों के लिए डिज़ाइन की गई है जो **कॉन्सेप्ट्स को चरण दर चरण** सीखना पसंद करते हैं। यदि आप ऐसा करके सीखना पसंद करते हैं, तो हमारे [व्यावहारिक ट्यूटोरियल](/tutorial/tutorial.html) को देखें। आपको यह मार्गदर्शिका और ट्यूटोरियल एक-दूसरे के पूरक लग सकते हैं।
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चरण दर चरण is the literal translation but, something better can be put in I think

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व्यावहारिक can be replaced by hindi word practical


This is the first chapter in a step-by-step guide about main React concepts. You can find a list of all its chapters in the navigation sidebar. If you're reading this from a mobile device, you can access the navigation by pressing the button in the bottom right corner of your screen.
मुख्य React कॉन्सेप्ट्स के बारे में चरण-दर-चरण मार्गदर्शिका में यह पहला अध्याय है। आप नेविगेशन साइडबार में इसके सभी अध्यायों की सूची पा सकते हैं। यदि आप इसे मोबाइल डिवाइस से पढ़ रहे हैं, तो आप अपनी स्क्रीन के निचले दाएं कोने में बटन दबाकर नेविगेशन का उपयोग कर सकते हैं।
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चरण-दर-चरण : same as before

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पा सकते -> dekh sakte


Every chapter in this guide builds on the knowledge introduced in earlier chapters. **You can learn most of React by reading the “Main Concepts” guide chapters in the order they appear in the sidebar.** For example, [“Introducing JSX”](/docs/introducing-jsx.html) is the next chapter after this one.
इस मार्गदर्शिका का प्रत्येक अध्याय पहले के अध्यायों में प्रस्तुत ज्ञान पर आधारित है। आप वे साइडबार में दिखाई देने वाले “मेन कॉन्सेप्ट्स” गाइड चैप्टर्स को एक क्रम में पढ़कर अधिकांश React को सीख सकते हैं। उदाहरण के लिए, [“JSX का परिचय”](/docs/introducing-jsx.html) इस के बाद अगला अध्याय है।
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वे साइडबार -> ve is additional

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एक क्रम में पढ़कर -> क्रम में पढ़कर

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अधिकांश React को सीख -> React ke adhiktar conceps ko seekh


React is a JavaScript library, and so we'll assume you have a basic understanding of the JavaScript language. **If you don't feel very confident, we recommend [going through a JavaScript tutorial](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/JavaScript/A_re-introduction_to_JavaScript) to check your knowledge level** and enable you to follow along this guide without getting lost. It might take you between 30 minutes and an hour, but as a result you won't have to feel like you're learning both React and JavaScript at the same time.
React एक जावास्क्रिप्ट लाइब्रेरी है, और इसलिए हम मान लेंगे कि आपको जावास्क्रिप्ट भाषा की बुनियादी समझ है। **यदि आप बहुत आत्मविश्वास महसूस नहीं करते हैं, तो हम अनुशंसा करते हैं कि आप अपने ज्ञान के स्तर की जांच करने के लिए एक [जावास्क्रिप्ट ट्यूटोरियल से गुजरें](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/JavaScript/A_re-introduction_to_JavaScript)** ताकि यह आपको बिना खोए इस गाइड का अनुसरण करने में सक्षम करें। यह आपको 30 मिनट और एक घंटे के बीच ले सकता है, लेकिन इसके परिणामस्वरूप आपको ऐसा महसूस करने की ज़रूरत नहीं है कि आप एक ही समय में React और जावास्क्रिप्ट दोनों सीख रहे हैं।
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हम मान लेंगे कि आपको जावास्क्रिप्ट -> hum ye maan kar chalenge ki aapko

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बहुत आत्मविश्वास महसूस नहीं -> in english it feels okay, but I feel you should add javascript main confident nai hain to in the hindi one

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लेकिन इसके परिणामस्वरूप आपको ऐसा महसूस करने की ज़रूरत नहीं है कि आप एक ही समय में React और जावास्क्रिप्ट दोनों सीख रहे हैं। -> grammar does not feel right

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>This guide occasionally uses some of the newer JavaScript syntax in the examples. If you haven't worked with JavaScript in the last few years, [these three points](https://gist.github.com/gaearon/683e676101005de0add59e8bb345340c) should get you most of the way.
>यह गाइड कभी-कभी उदाहरणों में कुछ नए जावास्क्रिप्ट सिंटैक्स का उपयोग करती है। यदि आपने पिछले कुछ वर्षों में जावास्क्रिप्ट के साथ काम नहीं किया है, तो [इन तीन बिंदुओं](https://gist.github.com/gaearon/683e676101005de0add59e8bb345340c) को आपको अधिक से अधिक प्राप्त करना चाहिए।
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को आपको अधिक से अधिक प्राप्त करना चाहिए। -> grammar check

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these three points -> ये तीन संकेत


Keep scrolling down, and you'll find the link to the [next chapter of this guide](/docs/introducing-jsx.html) right before the website footer.
नीचे स्क्रोल करते रहें, और आपको वेबसाइट पाद लेख से ठीक पहले [इस गाइड के अगले अध्याय](/docs/introducing-jsx.html) का लिंक मिल जाएगा।
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पाद -> footer

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Thanks, @gurjotsingh4398 for doing this! Have added some inline comments. Please look into those and feel free to discuss some if you feel they need to be worked on

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@gurjotsingh4398 any progress on the review comments?

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Yes , I am almost done with the changes.

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Yes , I am almost done with the changes.

Awesome! Just wanted to check if you needed some help. Also, do merge in the latest master since some changes have been merged there too.

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@saranshkataria @arshadkazmi42 I can't think of any other translation for चरण-दर-चरण in line 31 and 33.

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@gurjotsingh4398 how about क्रमशः ?

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a bit complex, but I also cannot think of something better

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How about you " ek ek karke"

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How about you " ek ek karke"

Works!

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Thanks @gurjotsingh4398. Merging this in!

@saranshkataria saranshkataria merged commit 3fc6492 into reactjs:master Feb 20, 2019
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