A Simple Scenario page feedback

[bertold]

Comments on the https://github.com/risk-first/website/wiki/A-Simple-Scenario page:

2nd paragraph:

Lets for a moment ...

Maybe this should be changed to "Let's - for a moment - " ..

In the "Hidden Risks" section, I would change the following sentence:

The difference is, Attendant Risks are risks you are aware of, but can't be sure of the amount they will impact you

I feel that "can't" is a strong word here. I would replace that with "may not be". I feel that it is universally not necessarily true that the impact of attendant risks are unknown. Of course, unless I misunderstood the definition.

[robmoffat]

Rewrote it:

https://github.com/risk-first/website/wiki/A-Simple-Scenario#hidden-risks

[bertold]

It looks much more polished. Thank you. Feel free to close.

[robmoffat]

thanks Bertold!