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Hi! The MOP currently has a value up to 7…let’s avoid more questions/confusion; please take the "(and above when extended)” part out. Thanks! Alvaro.
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diff --git a/roll-turnon-rfc8138.txt b/roll-turnon-rfc8138.txt
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Table of Contents
    7.  Security Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   7
    8.  Acknowledgments . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   8
    9.  Normative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   8
-   10. Informative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   8
+   10. Informative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   9
    Authors' Addresses  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   9
 
 1.  Introduction
@@ -215,8 +215,8 @@ Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH                  August 2020
 
    Section 6.3.1 of [RFC6550] defines a 3-bit Mode of Operation (MOP) in
    the DIO Base Object.  This specification applies to MOP values 0 to
-   6.  For a MOP value of 7 (and above when extended), the compression
-   MUST be used by default regardless of the setting of the "T" flag.
+   6.  For a MOP value of 7, the compression MUST be used by default
+   regardless of the setting of the "T" flag.
 
 
 
@@ -396,8 +396,9 @@ Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH                  August 2020
 
 8.  Acknowledgments
 
-   The authors wish to thank Alvaro Retana, Dominique Barthel and Rahul
-   Jadhav for their in-depth reviews and constructive suggestions.
+   The authors wish to thank Carles Gomez, Alvaro Retana, Dominique
+   Barthel and Rahul Jadhav for their in-depth reviews and constructive
+   suggestions.
 
    Also many thanks to Michael Richardson for being always helpful and
    responsive when need comes.
@@ -441,7 +442,6 @@ Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH                  August 2020
               leaves-18, 12 June 2020, <https://tools.ietf.org/html/
               draft-ietf-roll-unaware-leaves-18>.
 
-10.  Informative References
 
 
 
@@ -450,6 +450,8 @@ Thubert & Zhao           Expires 6 February 2021                [Page 8]
 Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH                  August 2020
 
 
+10.  Informative References
+
    [RFC6553]  Hui, J. and JP. Vasseur, "The Routing Protocol for Low-
               Power and Lossy Networks (RPL) Option for Carrying RPL
               Information in Data-Plane Datagrams", RFC 6553,
@@ -499,6 +501,4 @@ Authors' Addresses
 
 
 
-
-
 Thubert & Zhao           Expires 6 February 2021                [Page 9]
diff --git a/roll-turnon-rfc8138.xml b/roll-turnon-rfc8138.xml
@@ -235,9 +235,8 @@
 
    <t>
    Section 6.3.1 of <xref target='RFC6550'/>  defines a 3-bit Mode of Operation
-   (MOP) in the DIO Base Object.
-   This specification applies to MOP values 0 to 6. For a MOP value of 7 (and
-   above when extended), the compression MUST be used by default regardless of
+   (MOP) in the DIO Base Object. This specification applies to MOP values 0 to 6.
+   For a MOP value of 7, the compression MUST be used by default regardless of
    the setting of the “T” flag.
    </t>
    </section><!-- The RPL DODAG Configuration Option -->
@@ -444,8 +443,8 @@
 
    <section><name>Acknowledgments</name>
    <t>
-   The authors wish to thank Alvaro Retana, Dominique Barthel and Rahul Jadhav
-   for their in-depth reviews and constructive suggestions.
+   The authors wish to thank Carles Gomez, Alvaro Retana, Dominique Barthel and
+   Rahul Jadhav for their in-depth reviews and constructive suggestions.
    </t><t>
    Also many thanks to Michael Richardson for being always helpful and responsive
    when need comes.