Copy-Edit Categories

1. To be entered by O'Reilly

punctuation, including use of em dashes
'like' -> 'such as'
'which' -> 'that'
'while' -> 'whereas'
alternatives to 'below', 'above'
capitalization of titles and figure legends
hyphenation conventions in body of text (e.g, 'multi-line' -> 'multiline')
spelling
numerals (e.g., '5' -> 'five')

2. To be entered by Authors

??

3. No Change

boldface text retained for new and important terms
constant width retained for program names, menu names, filenames, etc

4. To be discussed

Retain long captions
Don't double-quote emphasized text inside captions, but set them in roman. (Why would emphasis show up as italic inside plain text, and double-quoted inside a caption?)

5. Other

Steven mentioned:

splitting a sentence-final example off into a new verb-less sentence.

Not sure what the issue is here.