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- adding Nymmmn-description as per freeorion#3207
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- degendering the Raaagh-description (he -> it/they)
- typo corrections in existing texts
- beautifications of species-descriptions-tooltips / pedia-pages:
        -- less wrapped lines -> easier readable in game start screen
        -- added a neutral symbol o to preexisting positive + and negative -
        -- added nonprintable ∘ character to facilitate search/replace for o∘
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1 change: 1 addition & 0 deletions default/scripting/species/SP_LAENFA.focs.txt
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// replenish fuel in suitably coloured star systems
EffectsGroup
description = "PHOTOTROP_DESC"
scope = Source
activation = And [
Ship
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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion default/scripting/species/SP_NYMNMN.focs.txt
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[[HAS_ADVANCED_FOCI]]
]

likes = ["BLD_NEUTRONIUM_SYNTH" "BLD_NEUTRONIUM_FORGE" "BLD_NEUTRONIUM_EXTRACTOR" "POSITRONIUM_SPECIAL" "MONOPOLE_SPECIAL" "MINERALS_SPECIAL" ]
likes = ["BLD_NEUTRONIUM_SYNTH" "BLD_NEUTRONIUM_FORGE" "BLD_NEUTRONIUM_EXTRACTOR" "POSITRONIUM_SPECIAL" "MONOPOLE_SPECIAL" "MINERALS_SPECIAL" "PANOPTICON_SPECIAL" ]
dislikes = ["PLC_DESIGN_SIMPLICITY" "FRACTAL_GEODES_SPECIAL" "SPARK_FOSSILS_SPECIAL" "BLD_GAS_GIANT_GEN" "BLD_SOL_ORB_GEN" "BLD_SOL_ACCEL" "BLD_GAS_GIANT_GEN" "BLD_SPATIAL_DISTORT_GEN" "ECCENTRIC_ORBIT_SPECIAL" "FORTRESS_SPECIAL" "GAIA_SPECIAL" ]

effectsgroups = [
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81 changes: 52 additions & 29 deletions default/stringtables/en.txt
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'''<img src="species/preview/laenfa.png"></img>
Sneaky, telepathic, sentient vines.
Prefer [[PT_OCEAN]] planets.
Ships regenerate 1 fuel per turn at white stars, and 2 fuel per turn a blue stars.
[[encyclopedia PHOTOTROPHIC_SPECIES_TITLE]], [[encyclopedia TELEPATHIC_TITLE]]
'''

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'''

SP_NYMNMN_DESC
''''''
'''Description:
Their ancestral desert world's environment posseses an extremely unlikely combination of fractally recurring storm patterns in the upper ionosphere, paired with constant static electrical discharges produced by solar tides from its neighbouring star system, which enabled the early development of self-replicating electromagnetic wavelets. These wavelets are comparable to the ancient precursors of single celled organisms and continued to evolve into more and more complex wafers over the eons. Since they can only exist in a quite narrow spectral band, there was never much room for the analogue of biodiversity – every more advanced developmental stage totally consumed its predecessors in order to be able to exist at all.

Social Structure:
Today's nymnmnian society is mainly preoccupied with reviewing and rating, archiving and cataloguing old tv shows and other entertainment broadcasts from foreign civilizations. They can not do otherwise, because those broadcasts touch the very essence of their beings – all their life is a non-stop binge-watching marathon if they want to or not. In consequence, they are the absolute masters of movie mockery in all the galaxies.
'''

SP_TRENCHERS
Trenchers
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'''

SP_TRENCHERS_DESC
'''Description:
Coming soon.
<img src="species/trenchers.png"></img>
'''

SP_RAAAGH
Raaagh
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'''

SP_RAAAGH_DESC
'''The Raaagh are 1.5 meter tall stripe-furred bipeds. The body is held leaning forward at 45 degrees, leaving the fanged jaws, and clawed arms free to fight, build or capture prey. Triangular ears and slit pupils give a cat-like appearance. The tiny young hatch from a clutch of a dozen eggs at once. Little care or attention is paid to the young at this stage - they must survive on their own competing against their siblings for hiding places and stealing food like vermin. After three years usually only one is left, and the surviving young begin to learn to speak. This suddenly activates parental instincts, and the survivor is carefully raised as a member of the Pride.
'''The Raaagh are 1.5 meter tall stripe-furred bipeds. The body is held leaning forward at 45 degrees, leaving the fanged jaws and clawed arms free to fight, build or capture prey. Triangular ears and slit pupils give a cat-like appearance. The tiny young hatch from a clutch of a dozen eggs at once. Little care or attention is paid to the young at this stage they must survive on their own, competing against their siblings for hiding places and stealing food like vermin. After three years usually only one is left, and the surviving young begin to learn to speak. This suddenly activates parental instincts, and the survivor is carefully raised as a member of the Pride.

Personality:
Extreme territoriality is the Raaagh's most distinctive trait, woven throughout their daily lives and culture. Related to that is a preference for the familiar and known. Curiosity is minimal, which probably explains their stone age technology.
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The Raaagh homeworld is of the Terran type. Sea and land are more or less evenly spread out, with the largest continent covering only 4% of planet's surface. The many small continents and large islands encourage a territorial attitude.

Reason for Staying:
There's not bit of land big enough for an individual Raaagh to live on that hasn't been fought over for centuries. The genetic compulsion of a Raaagh is to guard his territory with his life, and when possible to expand into adjacent land. Abandoning one's territory is inconceivable, and a Raaagh forcibly removed from his territory goes violently insane.
There's no bit of land big enough for an individual Raaagh to live on that hasn't been fought over for centuries. The genetic compulsion of a Raaagh is to guard its territory with their life, and when possible to expand into adjacent land. Abandoning one's territory is inconceivable, and a Raaagh forcibly removed from their territory goes violently insane.
'''

SP_BEIGEGOO
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− Bad [[metertype METER_INDUSTRY]]: 75%

AVERAGE_INDUSTRY_DESC
''' Average [[metertype METER_INDUSTRY]]: 100%'''
o∘ Average [[metertype METER_INDUSTRY]]: 100%

GOOD_INDUSTRY_DESC
+ Good [[metertype METER_INDUSTRY]]: 150%
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− Bad [[metertype METER_RESEARCH]]: 75%

AVERAGE_RESEARCH_DESC
''' Average [[metertype METER_RESEARCH]]: 100%'''
o∘ Average [[metertype METER_RESEARCH]]: 100%

GOOD_RESEARCH_DESC
+ Good [[metertype METER_RESEARCH]]: 150%
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− Bad [[metertype METER_INFLUENCE]]: 75%

AVERAGE_INFLUENCE_DESC
''' Average [[metertype METER_INFLUENCE]]: 100%'''
o∘ Average [[metertype METER_INFLUENCE]]: 100%

GOOD_INFLUENCE_DESC
+ Good [[metertype METER_INFLUENCE]]: 150%
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− Bad [[metertype METER_HAPPINESS]]: [[value BAD_HAPPINESS_VAL]]

AVERAGE_HAPPINESS_DESC
''' Average [[metertype METER_HAPPINESS]]: +0'''
o∘ Average [[metertype METER_HAPPINESS]]: +0

GOOD_HAPPINESS_DESC
+ Good [[metertype METER_HAPPINESS]]: +[[value GOOD_HAPPINESS_VAL]]
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− Bad Defensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 50%

AVERAGE_DEFENSE_TROOPS_DESC
''' Average Defensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 100%'''
o∘ Average Defensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 100%

GOOD_DEFENSE_TROOPS_DESC
+ Good Defensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 150%
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+++ Ultimate Defensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 300%

ANCIENT_DEFENSE_TROOPS_DESC
+++ Ancient Defensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 10 per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]
+++ Ancient Defensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: +10 per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]

NO_OFFENSE_TROOPS_DESC
−−− No Offensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]
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− Bad Offensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 50%

AVERAGE_OFFENSE_TROOPS_DESC
''' Average Offensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 100%'''
o∘ Average Offensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 100%

GOOD_OFFENSE_TROOPS_DESC
+ Good Offensive Ground [[metertype METER_TROOPS]]: 150%
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− Bad Planetary [[metertype METER_STEALTH]]: −20 malus

AVERAGE_STEALTH_DESC
''' Average Planetary [[metertype METER_STEALTH]]'''
o∘ Average Planetary [[metertype METER_STEALTH]]

GOOD_STEALTH_DESC
+ Good Planetary [[metertype METER_STEALTH]]: +20 bonus
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+++ Ultimate Planetary [[metertype METER_STEALTH]]: +60 bonus

BAD_WEAPONS_DESC
− Bad Pilots: Base damage per ship weapon reduced by one level.
− Bad Pilots: weapon damage reduced by one level

GOOD_WEAPONS_DESC
+ Good Pilots: Base damage per ship weapon increased by one level.
+ Good Pilots: weapon damage increased by one level

GREAT_WEAPONS_DESC
++ Great Pilots: Base damage per ship weapon increased by two levels.
++ Great Pilots: weapon damge increased by two levels

ULTIMATE_WEAPONS_DESC
+++ Ultimate Pilots: Base damage per ship weapon increased by three levels.
+++ Ultimate Pilots: weapon damage increased by three levels

PHOTOTROP_DESC
+ Refuel 1.0 per turn at White and 2.0 at Blue Stars

# 0.1 natural ramscoop-refuelling + 0.1 additional gaseous refueling = 0.2 q.e.d.
GASEOUS_DESC
'''+ Live on Gas Giants
+ Refuel on Gas Giants 0.1'''
+ Refuel on Gas Giants 0.2 per turn'''

BAD_POPULATION_DESC
− Bad [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]: 75%

AVERAGE_POPULATION_DESC
''' Average [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]: 100%'''
o∘ Average [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]: 100%

GOOD_POPULATION_DESC
+ Good [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]: 125%
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− Bad [[metertype METER_SUPPLY]]: no bonus

AVERAGE_SUPPLY_DESC
''' Average [[metertype METER_SUPPLY]]: +1'''
o∘ Average [[metertype METER_SUPPLY]]: +1

GREAT_SUPPLY_DESC
+ Great [[metertype METER_SUPPLY]]: +2
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− Bad [[metertype METER_STOCKPILE]]: +0.01 per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]

AVERAGE_STOCKPILE_DESC
''' Average [[metertype METER_STOCKPILE]]: +0.02 per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]'''
o∘ Average [[metertype METER_STOCKPILE]]: +0.02 per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]

GOOD_STOCKPILE_DESC
+ Good [[metertype METER_STOCKPILE]]: +0.06 per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]]
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+ Good planetary [[metertype METER_DEFENSE]]: +5

BROAD_EP_DESC
+ Broad Planet Tolerance: can tolerate more types.
+ Broad Planet Tolerance: can tolerate more types

NARROW_EP_DESC
−− Narrow Planet Tolerance: flourishes on fewer types.
−− Narrow Planet Tolerance: flourishes on fewer types

FAST_COLONIZATION_DESC
+ Fast Colonization: -25% time to build colonies
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− Bad Maximum [[metertype METER_FUEL]]: -0.5

AVERAGE_FUEL_DESC
''' Average Maximum [[metertype METER_FUEL]]: +0'''
o∘ Average Maximum [[metertype METER_FUEL]]: +0

GOOD_FUEL_DESC
+ Good Maximum [[metertype METER_FUEL]]: +0.5
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+++ Ultimate Maximum [[metertype METER_FUEL]]: +1.5

GREAT_ASTEROID_INDUSTRY_DESC
+ Good Asteroid Miners: + 0.2 [[metertype METER_INDUSTRY]] per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]] when Industry Focused in systems with owned asteroid belts.
'''+ Good Asteroid Miners:
+ 0.2 [[metertype METER_INDUSTRY]] per [[metertype METER_POPULATION]] when
Industry Focused in systems with owned asteroid belts.'''

LIGHT_SENSITIVE_DESC
− Light Sensitive: [[metertype METER_POPULATION]] is reduced in systems with [[STAR_BLUE]] and to a lesser extend [[STAR_WHITE]] stars.
'''− Light Sensitive: [[metertype METER_POPULATION]] is reduced‚
in systems with [[STAR_BLUE]] and to
a lesser extent [[STAR_WHITE]] stars.'''

TELEPATHIC_DETECTION_DESC
+ Telepathic Detection: can sense nearby populated planets.
'''+ Telepathic Detection: can sense
nearby populated planets'''

PRECOGNITIVE_DETECTION_DESC
+ Procognitive Detection: can sense starlane connected planets.
'''+ Precognitive Detection: can sense
starlane connected planets'''

COMMUNAL_VISION_DESC
''' Communal Vision: shares visibility within the same species.'''
'''o∘ Communal Vision: shares visibility within the
same species regardless of affiliation'''


##
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AI_SHIPDESIGN_NAME_INVALID
Invalid Design

# Newline separated list of military ship names owned by AIs.
# Newline separated list of military ship names owned by AIs. {
# The usage is determined by a rating defined inside the AI scripts. The names
# are roughly ordered by order of appearance in the game.
AI_SHIPDESIGN_NAME_MILITARY
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Nemesis
Zeus'''

# }
# Newline separated list of local troop transporter names owned by AIs.
# The usage is determined by a rating defined inside the AI scripts. The names
# are roughly ordered by order of appearance in the game.
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Gram
Gray
Grian
Gromphlamm
Grotto
Grue
Gruis
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Hera
Herbert
Herbig
Hermelin
Hercules
Herculis
Herschel
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Dugong
Elephant
Elk
Ermine
Fennec
Ferret
Fox
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Descartes
Dirac
Doppler
Drosten
Edison
Einstein
Euler
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