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nativescript/studio-webinar/article.md

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 ## Reason #1: Quick and easy scaffolding
 
-Studio helps allows you to visually build web and mobile apps. This means Studio is a great scaffolding tool, as you can easily create views, and then drag-and-drop UI controls to build up your interfaces quickly.
+Kinvey Studio allows you to visually build web and mobile apps. You can easily create views from a variety of templates, and then drag-and-drop UI controls to build up your interfaces quickly.
 
 ![](build-fast.gif)
 
-Under the hood, Studio uses NativeScript to drive mobile apps, so Studio-build apps have the same performance you’d expect out of NativeScript-built iOS and Android apps.
+Under the hood, Studio uses NativeScript to drive the mobile apps you build, so Studio-built apps have the same performance you’d expect out of NativeScript-built iOS and Android apps.
 
-New to Studio is a Mapbox component, which lets you easily add powerful native maps to your Studio apps.
+New to Kinvey Studio is a Mapbox UI component, which lets you easily add powerful native maps to your Studio apps.
 
 ![](mapbox.png)
 
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 Under the hood Studio uses [NativeScript and Angular’s official code-sharing approach](https://docs.nativescript.org/angular/code-sharing/intro), so you can rest assured you’re building apps on top of open standards.
 
+If you’ve been thinking about getting started with code-sharing with NativeScript, Studio is a great place to start.
+
 ## Reason #3: Connect to existing data and auth systems
 
-Everything in Kinvey Studio builds on top of the powerful [Kinvey platform](https://www.progress.com/kinvey). As such, you can easily tie into many of Kinvey’s best features—perhaps the most valuable of which are Kinvey’s data and identity connectors.
+Everything in Kinvey Studio builds on top of the powerful [Kinvey platform](https://www.progress.com/kinvey). As such, you can easily tie into many of Kinvey’s best features, such as Kinvey’s data and identity connectors.
 
-Do you have data in SQL Server, Salesforce, SAP, or Oracle? Do you need to use that data as part of a mobile app? If so check out our [articles](https://www.progress.com/blogs/using-kinveys-rapiddata-connectors) and [documentation](https://devcenter.kinvey.com/nativescript/guides/rapid-data) on connecting to existing data with Kinvey.
+Does your company have data that lives in SQL Server, Salesforce, SAP, or Oracle? Do you need to use that data as part of a mobile app? If so, Kinvey makes it easy to [connect to that data](https://devcenter.kinvey.com/nativescript/guides/rapid-data) and use it to build mobile apps with Studio’s visual tooling.
 
-Do you have an existing identity solution your organization already uses, like Active Directory? Kinvey can [connect to any identity provider that supports OAuth2, OpenID, or SAML](https://devcenter.kinvey.com/nativescript/guides/mobile-identity-connect), and once you make the connection you can seamlessly integrate your existing authentication provider directly into Studio-built apps. The end result looks like this for Active Directory.
+Do you have an existing identity solution your organization already uses, like Active Directory? Kinvey can [connect to any identity provider that supports OAuth2, OpenID, or SAML](https://devcenter.kinvey.com/nativescript/guides/mobile-identity-connect), and once you make the connection, you can seamlessly integrate your existing authentication provider directly into Studio-built apps. The end result looks like this for Active Directory.
 
 ![](mic-sample.gif)
 
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 ![](chatbot.gif)
 
-If you’ve been considering integrating a chatbot into your applications, Kinvey Chat is a great place to start as it allows you to build bots that run the on the web, in mobile apps, and even places like Facebook Messenger.
+If you’ve been considering integrating a chatbot into your applications, Kinvey Chat is a great place to start, as it allows you to build bots that run the on the web, in mobile apps, and even places like Facebook Messenger.
 
 New to Studio is a chat view, that allows you to connect to any Kinvey Chat instances with a simple dropdown.
 
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 ## Reason #5: Build fast while maintaining control
 
-Although Kinvey Studio is a visual tool, it was important to us that developers have the ability to extend Studio-built apps while continuing to use the tool.
-
-As such, we use open source and standard tools for everything we do, such as TypeScript, Angular, and NativeScript for Studio-built native apps.
+Although Kinvey Studio is a visual tool, we wanted to ensure developers maintain the ability to extend Studio-built apps with custom code.
 
-In Studio we never hide your code, and there are plenty of extensibility points for you to extend your views with custom code.
+Studio builds app using open source and standard tools, such as TypeScript, Angular, and NativeScript for Studio-built native apps. In Studio we never hide your code, and there are plenty of extensibility points for you to extend your views with custom logic.
 
 ![](code.png)
 
-New in Studio is a Custom Code View, which you can use when you need to build code-only views that continue to work with Studio’s other tooling.
+New in Studio is a Custom Code View, which you can use when to build code-only views that work with Studio’s other visual tooling.
 
 ![](custom-code-view.png)
 
 ## Learn more
 
-Overall, Studio gives professional developers a way to build fast, while preserving the ability to customize the apps to meet the real-world needs our users and customers have.
+Overall, Studio gives professional developers a way to build fast, while preserving the ability to customize you apps to meet the real-world needs of your users and customers.
 
-If you found this interesting and want to learn more, [sign up for our Studio-focused webinar this Thursday](https://www.progress.com/campaigns/kinvey/low-code-real-world-webinar?utm_medium=social-owned&utm_source=nativescript-blog), where we’ll cover everything in this article and more.
+If you found this interesting and want to learn more, [sign up for our Kinvey Studio webinar this Thursday](https://www.progress.com/campaigns/kinvey/low-code-real-world-webinar?utm_medium=social-owned&utm_source=nativescript-blog), where we’ll cover everything in this article and more.