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 It’s simple, quick, managed, and has absolutely no risk of code debt or lock-in.
 It’s just good ol’ logging.
 
-Timber’s philosophy is that application insight data should be open and owned by you.
-And there is no better, or more complete, vehicle than logging:
+Timber’s philosophy is that application insight should be open and owned by you. It should not
+require a myriad of services to accomplish. And there is no better, or more complete, vehicle
+than logging to solve this:
 
 1. It’s a shared practice that has been around since the dawn of computers.
 2. It’s baked into every language, library, and framework. Even your own apps.