Merge pull request #329 from w3c/issue-309

Safety vs Comfort Issue 309

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@@ -364,16 +364,17 @@ <h3 id="unacceptablebehavior">
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 	<h3>Safety versus Comfort</h3>
-        <p>This Code prioritizes the safety of individuals, particularly those in marginalized communities, over the comfort of others. We will prioritize safety in situations such as:</p>
+        <p>This Code prioritizes the safety of individuals, particularly those in marginalized communities, over the comfort of others. For example, the following behaviours are presumed to be acceptable even if they make some participants uncomfortable:</p>
         <ul>
           <li>Reasonable communication of boundaries, such as “leave me alone,”
           “go away,” or “I’m not discussing this with you”.
           </li>
           <li>Communication in a tone you don’t find congenial.
           </li>
-          <li>Criticisms of <a>racist</a>, <a>sexist</a>, <a>cissexist</a>, or otherwise oppressive behavior or assumptions. Similarly, we will not accept claims of perceived "Reverse" -isms, including "reverse racism," "reverse sexism," and "cisphobia".
+          <li>Critising oppressive behaviour or assumptions, such as those that are <a>racist</a>, <a>sexist</a>, or <a>cissexist</a>.
           </li>
- </ul>
+        </ul>
+        <p>Note that claims of perceived "reverse"-isms including "reverse racism," "reverse sexism," and "cisphobia" are not acceptable.</p>
       </section>
     </section>
     <section id="Reporting">