Josh update with Jakes suggestions

fast/index.html

@@ -193,39 +193,33 @@ <h2>Collected User Needs</h2>
 			<p>In the list below, there may be overlap between user needs, and known ways to meet user needs. These will need to be teased out over the course of the project.</p>
 			<p class="ednote">Structure: Top level is user need, 2nd level refines to user groups, 3rd level is ways to meet the need, below that is details.</p>
 			<ul>
-                    <li>Users can perceive content</li>
-    <li>Users can customize presentation</li>
+    <li>Users can perceive content</li>
+    <li>Users can customize content</li>
     <li>Users can understand content</li>
-    <li>User should not be confused by content</li>
+    <li>Users should not be confused by content</li>
     <li>Users can find help information about how to use the content</li>
     <li>Users can identify their position in content</li>
-    <li>User can navigate within content</li>
-    <li>Users are not distracted or interrupted by content </li>
+    <li>Users can navigate and interact within content</li>
+    <li>Users are not distracted by content </li>
+    <li>Users are not interrupted by content </li>
     <li>Users are not harmed by content </li>
     <li>Users are made aware of alerts</li>
     <li>Users can complete time-sensitive tasks</li>
-    <li>Users can recover from input errors</li>
-    <li>Users’ preferences are not overridden</li>
-    <li>User can perceivable content in a form other than produced by author</li>
-    <li>Users can orientate themselves as to their location</li>
-    <li>Users can adjust how content is presented/outputed</li>
+    <li>Users can recover from errors</li>
+    <li>Users personalization preferences are supported and honored</li>
+    <li>Users can orientate themselves in immersive or augmented environments</li>
     <li>Users can control time-based media, including dynamic values, EQ, volume</li>
-    <li>User can navigate content effectively</li>
-    <li>Users can perceive meaning in a way that they need</li>
+    <li>Users can navigate content effectively</li>
     <li>Users can interact in a device independent way</li>
     <li>Users can input data in a device independent way</li>
-    <li>User can manage distractions</li>
-    <li>User can avoid personal risk</li>
-    <li>User privacy should be preserved</li>
-    <li>Users can discover content </li>
-    <li>User are supported with instructions and can perceive object labels</li>
+    <li>Users can avoid personal risk</li>
+    <li>Users privacy should be preserved</li>
+    <li>Users can discover new content </li>
     <li>Users can avoid and recover from error</li>
-    <li>User do not need specific physical characteristics to interact </li>
-    <li>Users accessibility preferences are privaleged</li>
-    <li>User personalization preferences are supported</li>
-    <li>Users can route and control their communication channels and related content</li>
-    <li>Users are perceive a control or objects role, system state and other properties as needed </li>
-    <li>Users need to know current state/reflected is accurate</li>
+    <li>Users do not need to make specific physical movements to interact or complete tasks in immersive environments</li>
+    <li>Users accessibility preferences are not compromised by security</li>
+    <li>Users can route and control output to multiple channels such as braille or other second screen devices</li>
+    <li>Users are perceive changes to a control or objects role, system state and other properties</li>
 				</ul>
 		</section>
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