Amendments per @r12a

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             <p data-lang="zh-hans"><span class="leadin">省略号／删节号</span></p>
             <p data-lang="zh-hant"><span class="leadin">刪節號／省略號</span></p>
 
-            <p data-lang="en">Ellipses are used to indicate an truncation of text, an unfinished sentence or a break in speech.
-Usually use <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span>, making up a middle aligned series of six dots and take up the space of two Hanzi.</p>
-            <p data-lang="zh-hans">省略号又作删节号，表示节略原文、语句未完或语气的不连续。通常使用<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS […]</span>，呈现上占两个汉字空间、六个居中省略点。</p>
-            <p data-lang="zh-hant">刪節號又作省略號，表示節略原文、語句未完或語氣的不連續。通常使用<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS […]</span>，呈現上佔兩個漢字空間、六個居中省略點。</p>
+            <p data-lang="en">Ellipses are used to indicate a truncation of text, an unfinished sentence or a break in speech. An ellipsis in Chinese consists of six dots and takes up the space of two Hanzi characters. This is normally achieved using two <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span> characters, side-by-side.
+            <p data-lang="zh-hans">省略号又作删节号，表示节略原文、语句未完或语气的不连续。删节号呈现上占两个汉字空间、包含六个居中的省略点，通常使用两个连续的<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS […]</span>来实现。</p>
+            <p data-lang="zh-hant">刪節號又作省略號，表示節略原文、語句未完或語氣的不連續。刪節號呈現上佔兩個漢字空間、包含六個居中的刪節點，通常使用兩個連續的<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS […]</span>來實現。</p>
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           <li>
             <p data-lang="en"><span class="leadin">Emphasis Dots.</span></p>
@@ -1629,8 +1628,8 @@ <h4>
 	    <p data-lang="zh-hans" class="checkme">夾注符号，包括：引号、括号、书名号及篇名号(乙式)等，位于文本的两侧，占一个汉字的大小、依文字书写方向使用相应的标注方向。其中，引号在各地分别采用不同的形式，台湾多使用先单、后双（依此类推）的配对形式；中国大陆则使用先双、后单（依此类推）的配对形式，并按照文字书写方向采用相应的符号（横排使用弯引号，直排使用直角引号）。</p>
       <p data-lang="zh-hant">夾注符號，包括：引號、括號、書名號及篇名號（乙式）等，位受注文本的二側，佔一個漢字的大小、依文字書寫方向使用相應的標注方向。其中，引號在各地別採用不同的形式，台灣多使用先單、後雙（依此類推）的配對形式； 中國大陸則使用先雙、後單（依此類推）的配對形式，並依文字書寫方向採用相應的符號（橫排使用彎引號，直排使用直角引號）。</p>
       <p data-lang="en">Ellipses and long dashes, should be vertically and horizontally centered within their square frame, and should be one character in height and two characters in width. They are not supposed to be separated from one line to the next and should be positioned in the same direction as the characters.</p>
-      <p data-lang="zh-hans" class="checkme">省略号、破折号等标号，位于字面正中，占两个汉字的空间，并且不能因为适配分行断开或拆至两行，根据文字书写方向使用相应的标注方向。</p>
-      <p data-lang="zh-hant">包括：刪節號、破折號等標號，位字面正中，佔二個漢字的空間，並不得以適配分行之由斷開或拆至二行，依文字書寫方向使用相應的標注方向。</p>
+      <p data-lang="zh-hans">省略号、破折号等标号，位字面正中，占两个汉字的空间，并不得以适配分行之由断开或拆至两行，依文字书写方向使用相应的标注方向。</p>
+      <p data-lang="zh-hant">刪節號、破折號等標號，位字面正中，佔两個漢字的空間，並不得以適配分行之由斷開或拆至兩行，依文字書寫方向使用相應的標注方向。</p>
       <p data-lang="en">Connector marks should take up the same dimensions as a single character, and be vertically and horizontally centered within its square frame. Among the connector marks, the EN DASH should have a short length to distinguish it from the Chinese character [一], which means one. And they should be positioned in the same direction as the characters they mark.</p>
       <p data-lang="zh-hans" class="checkme">连接号位于字面正中，占一个汉字的大小，其中，甲式连接号在横排时，符号的直线长度应稍小于汉字“一”以避免歧义，按照文字书写方向使用相应的标注方向。</p>
       <p data-lang="zh-hant">連接號位字面正中，佔一個漢字的大小，其中，甲式連接號在橫排時，符號的直線長度應稍小於漢字「一」以避免歧義，依文字書寫方向使用相應的標注方向。</p>
@@ -1754,17 +1753,17 @@ <h5>
             <p data-lang="en"><span class="leadin">Em dash and long dash.</span></p>
             <p data-lang="zh-hans" class="checkme"><span class="leadin">乙式括号与破折号</span></p>
             <p data-lang="zh-hant"><span class="leadin">乙式括號與破折號</span></p>
-            <p data-lang="en">Long dashes [——] can be created using <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2E3A TWO-EM DASH</span> [⸺] or two adjacent <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2014 EM DASH</span> [—] characters. Both alternatives should take one character height and two character widths.</p>
+            <p data-lang="en">Long dashes [<span lang="zh">——</span>] can be created using <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2E3A TWO-EM DASH</span> [<span lang="zh">⸺</span>] or two adjacent <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2014 EM DASH</span> [<span lang="zh">—</span>] characters. Both alternatives should take one character height and two character widths.</p>
             <p data-lang="zh-hans">乙式括号与破折号是占两个汉字空间的<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2E3A TWO-EM DASH</span> [⸺] 或连续使用两个<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2014 EM DASH</span> [—]。</p>
             <p data-lang="zh-hant">乙式括號與破折號為佔二個漢字空間的<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2E3A TWO-EM DASH</span> [⸺] 或連續使用兩個<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2014 EM DASH</span> [—]。</p>
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           <li>
             <p data-lang="en"><span class="leadin">Horizontal ellipsis.</span> </p>
-            <p data-lang="zh-hans"><span class="leadin">省略号／删节号</span></p>
-            <p data-lang="zh-hant"><span class="leadin">刪節號／省略号</span></p>
-            <p data-lang="en">Use two <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span> […] to takes one character height and two character widths: [……].</p>
-            <p data-lang="zh-hans">省略号／删节号使用连续二个<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span> […]，占两个汉字空间、包含六个居中省略点[……]。</p>
-            <p data-lang="zh-hant">刪節號／省略號使用連續二個<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span> […]，佔二個漢字空間、包含居中六個省略點[……]。</p>
+            <p data-lang="zh-hans"><span class="leadin">省略号</span></p>
+            <p data-lang="zh-hant"><span class="leadin">刪節號</span></p>
+            <p data-lang="en">When two <span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span> [<span lang="zh">…</span>] characters are used together for ellipsis, they are, together, the height of one Hanzi character and the width of two Hanzi characters and consist of six dots.</p>
+            <p data-lang="zh-hans">省略号使用连续两个<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span> […]，占两个汉字空间、包含六个居中省略点[……]。</p>
+            <p data-lang="zh-hant">刪節號使用連續兩個<span class="uname" translate="no">U+2026 HORIZONTAL ELLIPSIS</span> […]，佔二個漢字空間、包含居中六個刪節點[……]。</p>
             <p data-lang="en">According to section 5.1.5 of the <cite>General Rules for Punctuation</cite> (GB/T 15834―2011), when two horizontal ellipses are used together, they should be four characters wide and occupy an independent line.</p>
             <p data-lang="zh-hans">《标点符号用法》（GB/T 15834–2011）5.1.5节还规定，两个省略号／删节号连用时，占四个汉字位置并须单独占一行。</p>
             <p data-lang="zh-hant">《標點符號用法》（GB/T 15834–2011）5.1.5節还规定，两个刪節號／省略號连用时，占四个漢字位置并须单独占一行。</p>