Editorial (first pass) #8896
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…nition * Give it a proper title * Give it a conceptual definition * State that it *will* get snapshotted, rather than it might * Make exclusion of 'none' from <custom-ident> normative * Various wording tweaks
…nts section * Define some high-level terms for better cross-referencing * Give a proper introduction to the pseudo tree * Move definition of named view-transition pseudo-elements to after we define what view-transition pseudo-elements are so we know what we're talking about * Give each pseudo-element a proper definition (“the algo generates it” is not a definition) * Include enough information that the pseudo-element tree is understandable from this section alone * Improve section titles * Make definition of view-transition-name more definitive
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