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Goals and Scope editorial #83

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anssiko opened this issue Mar 26, 2020 · 2 comments
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Goals and Scope editorial #83

anssiko opened this issue Mar 26, 2020 · 2 comments

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anssiko commented Mar 26, 2020

Need editorial revision. Some text inherited from the past charters that had a broader scope.

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The scope of device types seems broader than necessary,

Devices in this context include desktop computers, laptop computers, mobile Internet devices (MIDs), cellular phones, TVs, cameras and other connected devices.

We could simplify this to "desktop and mobile computing devices" or similar.

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xfq commented Apr 1, 2020

Fixed in #84.

@xfq xfq closed this as completed Apr 1, 2020
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