Revised examples for quality information

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@@ -1463,8 +1463,8 @@ <h2>Quality information</h2>
 The following section shows how DCAT and DQV can be coupled to describe the quality of datasets and distributions. For a comprehensive introduction  and further examples of use, please refer to the Data Quality Vocabulary (DQV) group note [[vocab-dqv]].    
 
 <section id="quality-example1">
-    <h2>Example of quality information</h2>
-  Considering a dataset :busStopInGenoa, which provides an incomplete georeferenced list of bus stops in Genoa; the quality dimension ldqd:completeness, which refers to "the degree to which all required information is present in a particular dataset"; the following quality annotation :qualityNote provides information about the completeness of the dataset :busStopInGenoa. 
+    <h2>Example providing quality information</h2>
+    A data consumer (:consumer1)  describes the quality of the dataset :busStopInGenoa that includes a georeferenced list of bus stops in Genoa. He/she annotates the dataset with a DQV quality note (:qualityNote) about data completeness (ldqd:completeness) to warn that the dataset includes only 20500 out of the 30000 stops.
 
     <pre>:busStopInGenoa a dcat:Dataset ;
     dqv:hasQualityAnnotation :qualityNote .
@@ -1474,16 +1474,18 @@ <h2>Example of quality information</h2>
     oa:hasTarget :busStopInGenoa ;
     oa:hasBody :textBody ;
     oa:motivatedBy dqv:qualityAssessment ;
+    prov:wasAttributedTo :consumer1 ;
+    prov:generatedAtTime "2018-05-27T02:52:02Z"^^xsd:dateTime ;
     dqv:inDimension ldqd:completeness
     .
 
 :textBody a oa:TextualBody ;
-    rdf:value "This dataset is incomplete, it contains only 20500 out of 30000 existing bus stops" ;
+    rdf:value "Incomplete dataset: it contains only 20500 out of 30000 existing bus stops" ;
     dc:language "en" ; 
     dc:format "text/plain" 
     . 
     </pre>
-In the following  :myMeasurement quality measurement for the :completenessWRTExpectedNumberOfEntities metric provides the same quality information.
+The activity :myQualityChecking employs the service :myQualityChecker to check the quality of the :busStopInGenoa dataset. The metric :completenessWRTExpectedNumberOfEntities is applied to measure the dataset completeness (ldqd:completeness) and it results in the quality measurement :myMeasurement.
     <pre>:busStopInGenoa
     dqv:hasQualityMeasurement :myMeasurement .
 
@@ -1510,10 +1512,10 @@ <h2>Example of quality information</h2>
     # Further details about quality service/software can be provided, for example,
     # deploying  vocabularies such as Dataset Usage Vocabulary (DUV), Dublin Core or ADMS.SW
 
-# :myQualityChecking is the activity that has generated :myMeasurement from :myDatasetDistribution
+# :myQualityChecking is the activity that has generated :myMeasurement from :busStopInGenoa
 :myQualityChecking
     a prov:Activity;
-    rdfs:label "The checking of myDatasetDistribution's quality"^^xsd:string;
+    rdfs:label "The checking of busStopInGenoa's quality"^^xsd:string;
     prov:wasAssociatedWith :myQualityChecker;
     prov:used              :busStopInGenoa;
     prov:generated         :myMeasurement;