Annette's suggested wording

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@@ -697,7 +697,8 @@ <h4>get resource by profile</h4>
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         <p>
           When a resource is returned that conforms to two or more profiles that are not within the same profile hierarchy
-          (i.e. the resource conforms to a set of profiles, but some of these are independent, not being specialised profiles of others in the set), the server SHOULD indicate indicate conformance to each independent profile.
+          (i.e. the resource conforms to a set of profiles, but some of these are independent, not being specialised
+          profiles of others in the set), the server SHOULD indicate indicate conformance to each independent profile.
         </p>
         <p>
           For example, using the HTTP Functional Profile,  a response from a server that conforms to both [[?GeoDCAT-AP]] and also [[?STATDCAT-AP]], given
@@ -744,16 +745,20 @@ <h3>Alternate Representations Data Model</h3>
       <h3>Order of Precedence for Implementation Profiles</h3>
       <p>
         A service MAY implement multiple <a>functional profile</a>s, including HTTP, QSA and possibly other approaches.
-        In such cases a client may specify conflicting choices via different mechanisms, for example the common case of client sending default headers but asking for a specific representation.
+        In such cases a client may specify conflicting choices via different mechanisms, for example the common case of
+        client sending default headers but asking for a specific representation.
         The order of precedence defined here determines which mechanism MUST be used.
       </p>
       <p>
-        The order of precedence is QSA over HTTP. 
+        The order of precedence is QSA over HTTP.
         This is on the basis that the more precisely a URI points to a resource,
         the more likely it is that the agent intends to request that precise resource
         irrespective of which HTTP headers are sent with that request.
       </p>
-      <p>If other functional profiles of the abstract model are defined then order of precedence will need to be established. No specific mechanism is proposed for how this may be declared.</p>
+      <p>
+        If other potentially conflicting functional profiles of the abstract model are defined, then order of precedence
+        will need to be established. No specific mechanism is proposed for how this may be declared.
+      </p>
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