edits from Wendy's review

i18n-wg/proposed-charter-2019-2020.html

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       <h1 id="title">PROPOSED Internationalization (i18n) Working Group Charter</h1>
-<p class="mission">The <strong>mission</strong> of the <a href="https://w3c.github.io/i18n-activity/i18n-wg/">Internationalization Working Group</a>  is to enable universal access to the World Wide Web by proposing and coordinating the adoption by the W3C of techniques, conventions, technologies, and designs that enable and enhance the use of W3C technology and the Web worldwide, with and between the various different languages, scripts, regions, and cultures.</p>
+<p class="mission">The <strong>mission</strong> of the <a href="https://w3c.github.io/i18n-activity/i18n-wg/">Internationalization Working Group</a>  is to enable universal access to the World Wide Web by proposing and coordinating the adoption by the W3C of techniques, conventions, technologies, and designs that enable and enhance the use of W3C technology and the Web worldwide, with and between  various different languages, scripts, regions, and cultures.</p>
 <div class="noprint">
   <p class="join"><a href="https://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/32113/join">Join the Internationalization Working Group.</a></p>
       </div>
@@ -136,7 +136,8 @@ <h1 id="title">PROPOSED Internationalization (i18n) Working Group Charter</h1>
 
       <section id="scope" class="scope">
         <h2>Scope</h2>
-        <ul><li>Technical issues related to internationalization and universal access across the globe. The Working Group provides advice and assistance related to internationalization and encompassing work related to international, linguistic, cultural, and writing system variations affecting W3C technologies. This advice should be provided to W3C Working Groups as early as possible in the development of specifications. The Working Group also tracks developments outside the W3C which have a bearing on the international Web, such as Unicode, IDN/ICANN issues, language tag and IRI developments at the IETF, JavaScript, etc.</li>
+        <ul>
+<li>Technical issues related to internationalization and universal access across the globe. The Working Group provides advice and assistance related to internationalization, encompassing work related to international, linguistic, cultural, and writing system variations affecting W3C technologies. This advice should be provided to W3C Working Groups as early as possible in the development of specifications. The Working Group also tracks developments outside the W3C which have a bearing on the international Web, such as Unicode, IDN/ICANN issues, language tag and IRI developments at the IETF, JavaScript, etc.</li>
 <li>Reviews and discussion of W3C technologies for internationalization issues, as these technologies develop. This encompasses a broad array of cultural, linguistic, technical and accessibility concerns. Review work may also include standards created by external standards bodies and organizations related to internationalization, if it is thought to be relevant to W3C technology. The Working Group maintains liaison relationships with these groups to ensure coordinated, consistent development of these standards.</li>
 <li>Gathering requirements for linguistic support. The Working Group supports groups documenting typographic and other requirements for scripts and languages around the world, with a view to informing specification developers and browser/ebook implementers about what needs to be supported.</li>
 <li>Outreach and inreach, in the forms of notes, articles, tutorials, presentations, tests and other resources to help specification writers, web masters, content authors, and others involved in developing and implementing the Web understand the issues involved and the techniques available with regard to supporting international use of Web technology.</li>
@@ -166,9 +167,9 @@ <h3>
 </div>
 
 
-<h4>Language enablement</h4>
+<h3>Language enablement</h3>
 <p>The WG will work with, coordinate, and publish documents for various task forces within the Internationalization Interest Group, which produce document layout and related requirements for the Web Platform and Electronic Book technologies. The aim is to produce documents similar to the <a href="https://www.w3.org/TR/jlreq/">Japanese Layout Requirements</a> and gap-analysis documents for a range of scripts and languages, and other sources of information for implementers and content developers. See a list of <a href="https://www.w3.org/International/layout">currently available information</a>.</p>
-<h4>Developer support</h4>
+<h3>Developer support</h3>
 <p>Review of specifications of other W3C Working Groups for issues related to
 internationalization, global usage, and cultural sensitivity is an essential
 deliverable of the Internationalization  Working Group. This is not a
@@ -179,15 +180,14 @@ <h4>Developer support</h4>
 <p>In addition to discussions arising from reviews, the Working Group is often called upon to support other Working Groups with adhoc advice and discussion.</p>
 <p>The WG will also develop checklists and guidance in written form for developers of specifications.</p>
 
-<h4>Author support</h4>
+<h3>Author support</h3>
 <p>The WG will continue  to publish resources on the
 <a href="https://www.w3.org/International/">Internationalization</a>
 subsite to assist users of W3C and related Web technologies to internationalize
 their applications, content, and services. These will include <a href="https://www.w3.org/International/articlelist">articles,
 tutorials, notes and reference pages</a>. </p>
 
-<p>The Working Group will also maintain the Internationalization Activity Web
-presence, and develop and maintain ways for users of its resources to quickly
+<p>The Working Group will also maintain the W3C Internationalization  subsite, and develop and maintain ways for users of its resources to quickly
 find the material they need, through a variety of means, including topic-based
 and task-based indexing.</p>
 <p>The WG will also provide internationalization-related best
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ <h4>Author support</h4>
   targeted at specific user types and activities, that group together and link to
   all relevant information in summary form, with an organization that aids their
   use.</p>
-<h4>Internationalization tests</h4>
+<h3>Internationalization tests</h3>
 
 <p>The WG will build on the <a
 href="https://www.w3.org/International/tests/">existing foundation</a> to create
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ <h4>Internationalization tests</h4>
 agent development teams from all the major browsers have used these tests for
 identifying, fixing or enhancing internationalization features or bugs in their browsers.</p>
 
-<h4>Outreach activities</h4>
+<h3>Outreach activities</h3>
 
 <p>The WG will seek to regularly present knowledge developed by the WG at
 conferences and meetings where Web internationalization topics are relevant,
@@ -239,21 +239,21 @@ <h3>Timeline</h3>
 
       <section id="coordination">
         <h2>Coordination</h2>
-<p>The i18n WG will work with other horizontal review groups for accessibility,  performance, privacy, and security, and with the TAG, both to coordinate procedure and technical work.</p>
+<p>The Internationalization WG will work with other horizontal review groups for accessibility,  performance, privacy, and security, and with the TAG, both to coordinate procedure and technical work.</p>
 <p>Additional technical coordination with the following Groups will be made, per the <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/#WGCharter">W3C Process Document</a>:</p>
 <div>
   <h3 id="w3c-coordination">W3C Groups</h3>
-<p>The I18n  WG will work with any W3C Working Group to ensure that
+<p>The Internationalization  WG will work with any W3C Working Group to ensure that
       their deliverables support international use. It will, however, have a special relationship with the:</p>
 <dl>
 <dt><a href="http://w3c.github.io/i18n-activity/i18n-ig/"
  >Internationalization Interest Group</a></dt>
-  <dd>The i18n  WG maintains close contact with the i18N IG. The I18N IG mailing
-    list is notified when resources produced by this WG are submitted to  for review. Notifications are also sent to the IG lists when changes are made to issues in the GitHub repositories belonging to this group.  The I18N IG mailing list will also be used for sharing
+  <dd>The Internationalization  WG maintains close contact with the Internationalization IG. The Internationalization IG mailing
+    list is notified when resources produced by this WG are submitted to  for review. Notifications are also sent to the IG lists when changes are made to issues in the GitHub repositories belonging to this group.  The Internationalization IG mailing list will also be used for sharing
     teleconference minutes and information about the work of this WG, sending out information about the
     progress of this WG at regular intervals, and soliciting feedback in
     general. Members of this WG are expected to also become members of the
-    I18N IG to assure a smooth flow of information. The WG will also work closely with the
+    Internationalization IG to assure a smooth flow of information. The WG will also work closely with the
     task forces in the purvey of the Interest Group to publish documents about layout and 
     similar requirements.</dd>
 </dl>
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ <h3 id="external-coordination">External Organizations</h3>
       with impact on Web Internationalization, such as the IRI WG and the work related to language tags.</dd>
 <dt><a href="http://unicode.org/">Unicode Technical Committee
   (UTC)</a></dt>
-<dd>A liaison has been established. The i18n WG will review Unicode Consortium publications for Web-related internationalization features, where needed.</dd>
+<dd>A liaison has been established. The Internationalization WG will review Unicode Consortium publications for Web-related internationalization features, where needed.</dd>
 <dt><a href="http://www.ecma-international.org/memento/TC39.htm">Ecma TC 39 (ECMAScript)</a></dt>
 <dd> We will work with Ecma TC 39 on the development of the new EcmaScript Internationalization API Specification standard and the internationalization of the EcmaScript Language Specification (ECMA-262). The EcmaScript standard defines the core of the JavaScript programming language.</dd>
 <dt>Supra-national and national standards bodies</dt>
@@ -369,13 +369,13 @@ <h2>
       </section>
 <section id="patentpolicy">
 <h2>Patent Disclosures </h2>
-<p>The Interest Group provides an opportunity to
+<p>The Working Group provides an opportunity to
           share perspectives on the topic addressed by this charter. W3C reminds
-          Interest Group participants of their obligation to comply with patent
+          Working Group participants of their obligation to comply with patent
           disclosure obligations as set out in <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-Disclosure">Section
-            6</a> of the W3C Patent Policy. While the Interest Group does not
-          produce Recommendation-track documents, when Interest Group
-          participants review Recommendation-track specifications from Working
+            6</a> of the W3C Patent Policy. While the Working Group does not
+          produce Recommendation-track documents, when Working Group
+          participants review Recommendation-track specifications from other Working
           Groups, the patent disclosure obligations do apply. For more information about disclosure obligations for this group,
           please see the <a href="https://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/">W3C
             Patent Policy Implementation</a>.</p>