Address comments by @mounrilamori

index.bs

@@ -195,19 +195,19 @@ Remote Playback API Requirements {#requirements-remote-playback}
 2.  A controlling user agent must be able to start sending the content of an
     {{HTMLMediaElement}} to a compatible remote playback device.
 
-3.  The {{HTMLMediaElement}} content to be sent should include both media data
-    and text tracks.
+3.  The controlling user agent should be able to send both media data
+    and text tracks from an {{HTMLMediaElement}} to the remote playback device.
 
 4.  During remote playback, the controlling user agent and the remote playback
     device must be able to synchronize the [=media element state=] of the
     {{HTMLMediaElement}}.
 
-5.  During remote playback, either the controlling user agent or the remote
-    playback device must be able to disconnect from the other party.
+5.  During remote playback, either the controlling user agent or the
+    remote playback device must be able to disconnect from the other party.
 
-6.  The controlling user agent should be able to pass locale and text direction
-    information to the remote playback device to assist in rendering text during
-    remote playback.
+6.  The controlling user agent should be able to pass locale and text
+    direction information to the remote playback device to assist in rendering
+    text during remote playback.
 
 
 Non-Functional Requirements {#requirements-non-functional}

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@@ -1214,7 +1214,7 @@
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@@ -1466,7 +1466,7 @@
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    <h1 class="p-name no-ref" id="title">Open Screen Protocol</h1>
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc no-ref heading settled" id="subtitle"><span class="content">Editor’s Draft, <time class="dt-updated" datetime="2019-05-10">10 May 2019</time></span></h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc no-ref heading settled" id="subtitle"><span class="content">Editor’s Draft, <time class="dt-updated" datetime="2019-05-14">14 May 2019</time></span></h2>
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     <dl>
      <dt>This version:
@@ -1675,18 +1675,18 @@ <h3 class="heading settled" data-level="2.2" id="requirements-remote-playback"><
     <li data-md>
      <p>A controlling user agent must be able to start sending the content of an <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://html.spec.whatwg.org/multipage/media.html#htmlmediaelement" id="ref-for-htmlmediaelement①">HTMLMediaElement</a></code> to a compatible remote playback device.</p>
     <li data-md>
-     <p>The <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://html.spec.whatwg.org/multipage/media.html#htmlmediaelement" id="ref-for-htmlmediaelement②">HTMLMediaElement</a></code> content to be sent should include both media data
-and text tracks.</p>
+     <p>The controlling user agent should be able to send both media data
+and text tracks from an <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://html.spec.whatwg.org/multipage/media.html#htmlmediaelement" id="ref-for-htmlmediaelement②">HTMLMediaElement</a></code> to the remote playback device.</p>
     <li data-md>
      <p>During remote playback, the controlling user agent and the remote playback
 device must be able to synchronize the <a data-link-type="dfn" href="https://w3c.github.io/remote-playback/#dfn-media-element-state" id="ref-for-dfn-media-element-state">media element state</a> of the <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://html.spec.whatwg.org/multipage/media.html#htmlmediaelement" id="ref-for-htmlmediaelement③">HTMLMediaElement</a></code>.</p>
     <li data-md>
-     <p>During remote playback, either the controlling user agent or the remote
-playback device must be able to disconnect from the other party.</p>
+     <p>During remote playback, either the controlling user agent or the
+remote playback device must be able to disconnect from the other party.</p>
     <li data-md>
-     <p>The controlling user agent should be able to pass locale and text direction
-information to the remote playback device to assist in rendering text during
-remote playback.</p>
+     <p>The controlling user agent should be able to pass locale and text
+direction information to the remote playback device to assist in rendering
+text during remote playback.</p>
    </ol>
    <h3 class="heading settled" data-level="2.3" id="requirements-non-functional"><span class="secno">2.3. </span><span class="content">Non-Functional Requirements</span><a class="self-link" href="#requirements-non-functional"></a></h3>
    <ol>