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Editorial changes #465

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Some editorial changes:
ianbjacobs Mar 20, 2017
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Run through tidy with this config file:
ianbjacobs Mar 21, 2017
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tweaks based on marcos suggestions
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<p>
This specification describes an API that allows <a>user agents</a>
(e.g., browsers) to act as an intermediary between three systems in
every transaction: the merchant (e.g., an online web store), the buyer,
represented by the <a>user agent</a> (e.g., the user buying from the
online web store), and the <dfn data-lt="payment methods">payment
method</dfn> (e.g., credit card). Information necessary to process and
confirm a transaction is passed between the <a>payment method</a> and
the merchant via the <a>user agent</a> with the buyer confirming and
authorizing as necessary across the flow.
</p>
(e.g., browsers) to act as an intermediary between three parties in
a transaction:</p>

<ul>
<li>the payee, such as a merchant with an online store,</li>
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I'd prefer these ended in full stop.

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*each of these

<li>the payer, such as a person making a purchase on that online store, and who authenticates and authorizes payment as required,</li>
<li>the provider of a <dfn data-lt="payment methods">payment
method</dfn> (e.g., credit card) that the payer uses to pay, and
that is accepted by the payee.</li>
</ul>

<p>
The details of how to fulfill a payment request for a given <a>payment
method</a> are handled by <dfn data-lt="payment app">payment
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</h2>
<ul>
<li>Allow the user agent to act as intermediary between merchants,
users, and <a>payment methods</a>
users, and <a>payment method</a> providers.
</li>
<li>Standardize (to the extent that it makes sense) the communication
flow between a merchant, user agent, and <a>payment method</a>
flow between a merchant, user agent, and <a>payment method</a> provider.
</li>
<li>Allow <a>payment methods</a> to bring more secure payment
transactions to the web
<li>Enable <a>payment method</a> providers to bring more secure payment transactions to the web.
</li>
</ul>
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<p>
A web page creates a <a>PaymentRequest</a> to make a payment request.
This is typically associated with the user initiating a payment process
(e.g., selecting a "Power Up" in an interactive game, pulling up to an
automated kiosk in a parking structure, or activating a "Buy",
"Purchase", or "Checkout" button). The <a>PaymentRequest</a> allows the
(e.g., by activating a "Buy," "Purchase," or "Checkout" button
on a web site, selecting a "Power Up" in an interactive game, or
paying at a kiosk in a parking structure).
The <a>PaymentRequest</a> allows the
web page to exchange information with the <a>user agent</a> while the
user is providing input before approving or denying a payment request.
</p>
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const methodData = [{
supportedMethods: ["basic-card"],
data: {
supportedNetworks: ['aFamousBrand', 'aDebitNetwork'],
supportedNetworks: ['visa, 'mastercard'],
supportedTypes: ['debit']
}
}, {
supportedMethods: ["bobpay.com"],
supportedMethods: ["https://example.com/bobpay"],
data: {
merchantIdentifier: "XXXX",
bobPaySpecificField: true
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