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Editorial: define create a PaymentAddress algo #644

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@marcoscaceres marcoscaceres commented Nov 5, 2017

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A few nits that would be good to fix.

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<li>Set <var>address</var>.<a>[[\country]]</a> to the user-provided
<a>country</a> as an upper case [[!ISO3166]] alpha-2 code, or to the
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Should not be <a>country</a> as that links to a dictionary member.

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good catch.

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The steps to <dfn>create a payment address</dfn> are given by the
following algorithm.
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It'd be nice to mention in this sentence something like "create a payment address from user-provided input" as otherwise you get a bit taken aback realizing that this algorithm isn't a general creation algorithm, it's specifically about user input.

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<li>Let <var>address</var> be the result of running the steps to
<a>create a payment address</a>
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Missing a period.

@marcoscaceres marcoscaceres merged commit fe1a3ca into gh-pages Nov 6, 2017
@marcoscaceres marcoscaceres deleted the create_payment_address branch November 6, 2017 20:18
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