implementing changes to SC per CFC

w3c · Nov 30, 2017 · 3a2a7b9 · 3a2a7b9
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@@ -7,10 +7,9 @@ <h4>Orientation</h4>
    <p class="change">New</p>
 
    <p class="ednote">Discussion of the issue is available in <a href="https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/70">Issue 70</a>. To file comments on this proposal, please <a href="https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/new">raise new issues</a> for each discrete comment in GitHub.
-   </p>
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-   <p>Content is not locked to a specific <a>display orientation</a>, and functionality of the content is operable in all display orientations, except where display orientation
-      is <a>essential</a> for use of the content.</p>
+  </p>
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+  <p>Content does not restrict its view and operation to a single <a>display orientation</a>, such as portrait or landscape, unless a specific display orientation is <a>essential</a>.</p>
 
    <p class="note">Examples where a particular display orientation may be essential are a bank check, a piano application, slides for a projector or television, or virtual reality content where binary display orientation is not applicable.</p>