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@@ -3194,7 +3194,8 @@ associated with or [=scoped=] to, respectively.
 
         When [=clients=], [=client platforms=], or [=authenticators=] display a {{PublicKeyCredentialEntity/name}}'s value, they should always use UI elements to provide a clear boundary around the displayed value, and not allow overflow into other elements [[css-overflow-3]].
 
-        Authenticators MAY truncate a {{PublicKeyCredentialEntity/name}} member's value so that its UTF-8 encoding fits within 64 bytes, if the authenticator stores the value. See [[#sctn-strings-truncation]] about truncation and other considerations.
+        Authenticators MAY truncate characters from the end of a {{PublicKeyCredentialEntity/name}} member's value so that when encoded in UTF-8, its length fits within 64 bytes. See [[#sctn-strings-truncation]] about truncation and other considerations.
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@@ -3266,8 +3267,8 @@ credential.
         When [=clients=], [=client platforms=], or [=authenticators=] display a {{PublicKeyCredentialUserEntity/displayName}}'s value, they should always use UI elements to provide a clear boundary around the displayed value, and not allow overflow into other elements [[css-overflow-3]].
 
         [=Authenticators=] MUST accept and store a {{PublicKeyCredentialUserEntity/displayName}} member's value
-        whose UTF-8 encoding is 64 bytes or shorter.
-        Authenticators MAY truncate a {{PublicKeyCredentialUserEntity/displayName}} member's value so that its UTF-8 encoding fits within 64 bytes. See [[#sctn-strings-truncation]] about truncation and other considerations.
+        whose length in the UTF-8 character encoding is 64 bytes or shorter.
+        Authenticators MAY truncate characters from the end of a {{PublicKeyCredentialEntity/displayName}} member's value so that when encoded in UTF-8, its length fits within 64 bytes. See [[#sctn-strings-truncation]] about truncation and other considerations.
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