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Terminology: WebAuthn Relying Party - no account creation #71

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Proposed resolution for Issue #70 (#70)

@@ -2459,7 +2459,7 @@

: <dfn>Relying Party</dfn>
: <dfn>WebAuthn Relying Party</dfn>
:: The entity which needs to rely in the authentication provided by the WebAuthn specification. At the conclusion of the account creation, the Relying Party has the public key that was created by the Authenticator.
:: The entity which needs to rely in the authentication provided by the WebAuthn specification. At the conclusion of the registration, the Relying Party has the public key that was created by the Authenticator.
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"At the conclusion of the registration" sounds weird. Can we say "When registration concludes", or if you want to link to the section on this, "When [[#registration-embedded]] concludes"?

Agreed & incorporated Vijay's recommendation.
@@ -2459,7 +2459,7 @@

: <dfn>Relying Party</dfn>
: <dfn>WebAuthn Relying Party</dfn>
:: The entity which needs to rely in the authentication provided by the WebAuthn specification. At the conclusion of the registration, the Relying Party has the public key that was created by the Authenticator.
:: The entity which needs to rely in the authentication provided by the WebAuthn specification. When [[#registration-embedded]] concludes, the Relying Party has the public key that was created by the Authenticator.
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Apologies for the noise, but I take this back. It might be better not to have the link here. This is how it now renders after Bikeshed processing:

When §1.1 Registration (embedded authenticator mode) concludes, the Relying Party has the public key that was created by the Authenticator.

May be better just to have the word "registration" instead of the link.

I've reverted to 'registration' - I still think the idea of referring to the Registration section is good. Is there a way to refer to it by section number and not section title?
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vijaybh commented Apr 13, 2016

LGTM. Thanks!

@vijaybh vijaybh merged commit 7079269 into master Apr 13, 2016
@vijaybh vijaybh deleted the Issue-70 branch April 13, 2016 23:54
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